My sweetest Sin - Chapter VII

Aug 05, 2010 11:36

My problems go from bad to worse. Oh, save me from them all!

(Psalm 25:17)

Raindrops were still crashing heavily against the cold glass of the window Yunho was pressed into, his naked skin instantly starting to shiver due to the stark contrast to its own heated condition. Somewhere out of town the thunderstorm neared its peak, including the ( Read more... )

drama, chaptered, romance, angst, smut, my sweetest sin, rating: nc 17

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sailorgraphics August 5 2010, 20:36:35 UTC
<3

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sailorgraphics August 5 2010, 21:43:54 UTC
I have been waiting so long for this chapter T_T I'm happy to red it *o*

Gorgeous, beautiful, amazing smut ! I want more smut, yeah. You must write more smut

I like the first part. I don't like te second part. (Yeah, so much reviews xD)

I love the way whose YunHo changes him habits just for Jae <3 For a moment, he seems lovely and... almost in love é__è

I'm scared to see Jae's awakening T__T I don't want him to be sad é_è Or maybe the drug will have effects extending xD

YunHo must understand his feelings for JJ ! And don't have sex with other guys !

It's so sad for both, JJ is going to feel stupid and dirty. And YunHo understand nothing, stupid (but sexy) sinner

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saihchan August 11 2010, 12:55:48 UTC
Hey my darling♥
I'm very glad you liked the smut - I tried to write it a little differently from before, so I was nervous^^; I shall write more smut then, eh? I'll try^^
The second half is sadder again, jepp~ I'm afraid Yun is a little afraid about opening up, so he rather hurts the people that come to close to him... and JJ is in that unfortunate position :( But hey, he's a very stubborn steady boy, so I'm positive he won't give up easily ;)

Thank you so much for your comment, darling♥

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yunhos August 5 2010, 20:40:22 UTC
SPOT! ♥
Oh, bb, I freaking LOVE this fic. The smut was gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous :3
I'm glad you updated, bb! Please keep up the amazing work! ♥
Hwaiting~!

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saihchan August 11 2010, 13:11:39 UTC
^^ I'm very happy you liked it, my dear!!!!! I'll try and provide the next chapter soon :D Thank you so much♥

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lamerk August 5 2010, 20:54:25 UTC
i feel so sad for both of them *sobs*
thank you so much for update!
and your smut doesn't suck at all bb :Q______________

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saihchan August 11 2010, 13:13:20 UTC
Thank you very much, bb♥ I know, their situation still seems pretty bad, especially after there was a little bit of progress^^; Oh, how I love the drama~

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jadyuu August 5 2010, 21:48:48 UTC
Honnestly ( ... )

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saihchan August 11 2010, 13:22:46 UTC
Hey darling!
First of all: I'm very happy you enjoyed the chapter! Yunho is very, very afraid of getting too close to people, so yeah, his words were aweful, but that's like the only way he knows to handle this - pushing people away from him :( Let's hope Jae will be a better influence on him and can help him opening up ;)
About the story of your friend: gosh, this is horrible!!! I tend to try and never drink from a glass that left my hand (except when I leave it in a friend's hand), but I guess in a happy atmosphere like a party people tend to get careless. And on top of that, she even had an allergy? Damn, poor girl!!! Great thing she has good friends as you, who stayed by her side and called the ambulance! You can be proud of you, you all reacted perfectly ( ... )

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yunho1205 August 5 2010, 22:09:58 UTC
OMO!!! Your different/new way of writing smut was AWESOME!! I loved it! Seriously, it makes the smut seem so real and intense!! Great job!!

Oh noooo!! Jae's gonna be so confused when he wakes up, and then crushed when he reads the note after realizing what happened between them! Awwwww! Poor Joongie!! :(

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saihchan August 11 2010, 13:27:10 UTC
♥ I'm sooooo happy the smut-style is liked^^ It was tough to write it, though^^; But as long as you enjoyed it, I'm the happiest little writer ♥
Yeah, Joongie will be very hurt/confused/shocked when he wakes up -_- poor bb~ lets hope, he'll be okay...

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