Too Little, Too Late

Aug 16, 2008 10:26

Title: Too Little, Too Late
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daniella_holt August 16 2008, 17:58:47 UTC
Oh My God! This is so sad!!! D=

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saime_joxxers August 16 2008, 18:55:47 UTC
... I'm sowwy! -sniffle-

Sad good, or sad bad?

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daniella_holt August 16 2008, 19:08:39 UTC
Absolutely Sad Good =)

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saime_joxxers August 16 2008, 19:30:44 UTC
Ahh, thanks very much. ^^ I'm glad. xD

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chickenpattysan August 17 2008, 02:05:45 UTC
Oh, wow, great work! I liked this vision of how events could have unfolded, and the ending was wonderful.

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saime_joxxers August 17 2008, 17:25:57 UTC
Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I originally had the end part slightly different, and just as a drabble, but it left too many questions unanswered, so I decided to write a longer one-shot and add it into the end. I was worried that it would seem tacked on (it kind of was xD), but I'm glad it turned out alright!

Thanks very much. ^^

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orphanofdreams August 17 2008, 14:54:22 UTC
To put it in one word: awesome.
I can't describe how touching your story is. Almost makes me cry every time I read it. ;__; Means a lot concerning my cold heart.

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saime_joxxers August 17 2008, 17:27:46 UTC
-responding in one word-

THANKEES!

Technically, it's not a REAL word... but whatevs.

I'm kind of sorry that I made it so sad for all you guys. -sniffle- I feel bad now. xDDD I'm glad you like it, though.

This was the first fic I really went into with the express purpose of making it all sad and whatnot, just to see if I could. So I'm kind of glad I succeeded, but like I said, I FEEL BAD! But I'm really glad you still read it and liked it regardless of my horrible-make-you-sad-ness. xD

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orphanofdreams August 17 2008, 18:24:31 UTC
Free Kleenex available for all readers would have been a good idea, eh?
One of the best fics I've read within the last weeks. ^_^

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saime_joxxers August 18 2008, 01:15:15 UTC
Awww, thanks so much! That's a HUGE compliment. ^^

And I will definitely consider setting up a Kleenex table next time I try for a sad fic. xD I'm glad it turned out okay. Hopefully it will jump start my muse, which has been angry with me for the last few weeks. =P

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warrior_cat August 18 2008, 10:54:20 UTC
Oh my god! This is the saddest, most beautiful thing I have read in some time, and now I'm about to cry.

Wonderful!

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saime_joxxers August 18 2008, 12:48:30 UTC
I have learned from my errors... -offers Kleenex- There we are. ^^

I'm truly pleased that you like it. And I really appreciate the comments. Oodles and oodles. ^^

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saime_joxxers August 21 2008, 01:42:08 UTC
Thanks very much. ^^ I'm glad you like it. And I don't actually know where the little blanket came from, but I was just writing and it kind of appeared and I went 'she would SO give him a mini-blanket'. I'm glad I'm not alone in that thought. xDDD And thanks, I'm glad it's In Character. I was a bit worried, what with him being all 'I'm going to die, and I'm sick, and as mentally unstable as ever', and the KIND of 'I love you moment'... sometimes those can be OOC entirely... andyeah. I appreciate your comment. ^^

And... er... yeah, I guess firing squad was a kind of honourable way of dying. So... it probably would have been the hangman's noose, seeing as it wasn't a military crime. Oops. Next time I'll watch out for that. Thanks!

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saime_joxxers September 8 2008, 02:13:28 UTC
Thanks for the pimp, by the way! I appreciate it. ^^

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