Ghosts in My Head (Chapter 1)

[saint_elsewhere]

Chapter 1

Anthony coughed at the culminating dust that arose in the stuffy air as he cracked his musty window ajar, carefully pulling it up as it creaked. He waved off the foggy air as he peered his head through the window. The lowering sun shone brightly over the busy, tight streets filled with bright cars and the city was loud with the bustle of

Comments

[mutual_death]

Ian is such a jerk. ]= Who gives up on someone they love like that? Poor Anthony. No matter how difficult it would be to deal with, if you love someone you owe them to at least try.

*ahem* Anyway, nicely written and I'm loving the original plot. Keep 'em coming! ;)

[saint_elsewhere]

Thank you! :)

[saint_elsewhere]

I love hunger games too!

THANKS!! More soon!

[smoshy_love]

So Amazing and beautifully written! Great plot line. I AM EXPECTING THE NEW CHAPTER VERY SOON

[saint_elsewhere]

Thank you! It should be out soon!

[9800andseagulls]

Wow! Ahhmazing! Love it!

[saint_elsewhere]

Thanks :)

[fchapxih13]

Oh my goshh, this is so freakin' amazing. Gah. I felt like I was going to cry :'(
WRITE MORE. NOWW. The Voice commands you to do it.

[saint_elsewhere]

Thank youuu :D

GO AWAY VOICE. NO ONE WANTS YOU HERE. ahahhahah