15. The Devil

[saintli]

Title: Raise Hell
Author: SaintLi
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Robber/Driver (Eli/Gabe)
Wordcount (this chapter): 5,722
Fandom: Mint Royale

Comments

[yeahwehadatime]

oh. my. GOD. (my brain seems to have short-circuited, or i'd leave a proper comment)

i...i think i need a cigarette or something?

[worriedeye]

Effin hell man! There is no subtle way to say this - I am so turned on right now! And again the writing is so so beautiful. The cleaning of the flat and the discovery of the artwork was simply transporting, and that sex scene was incredible. You really are a fabulous writer and this whole work is one of the best I've ever read. x

[littleredchucks]

This was so amazing I may have cried, by which I mean I did cry, quite a little bit. It was so beautifully discribed, sad and revealing and with their desperation for each other bleeding through. The locked room makes sense now and paintings like the one with the pearls, his mothers pearls, make me wonder what his childhood was really like, what's really going on in his head. You're writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing it with us. xx

[headphones366]

I'm absolutely loving this. Please, do continue!