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Jul 14, 2007 14:58

Title: Sectumsempra Animi
Chapter: 5--Crush
Author: sakaimWord count: 5,305 (this chapter; over 27K overall ( Read more... )

sectumsempra animi, harry/draco, pre-deathly hallows, nc-17

Comments 4

scilera July 14 2007, 20:56:06 UTC

Wow, intense...

Draco's really dug himself a hole this time, hasn't he? I can't wait to see if and how he can get himself out of it. On the edge of my seat!

<3

spellwinder666 July 15 2007, 14:16:55 UTC

wow!

idontgiveafaux July 17 2007, 11:28:54 UTC

OH MY FUCKING GOD
i have never been so scared in all my life
(let me explain)
just as bellatrix was taunting potter and then threw the killing curse to draco
the sky here (it's raining very heavily) suddenly lit up with a flash of lightning and really loud thunder suddenly echoed around me. my god, my heart practically leapt out of my body. that was so horrible.
anyway back to the story:
incredible. the ending of this chapter was heartbreaking. i was so sad when harry pushed narcissa in the path of the curse - especially since she had been fighting for them. and you made it extra sad by having her understand why he did it moments before she was killed :'( you realy know how to tug at the heartstrings ;)
interesting to see where this is going and you mention at the top that it will be completed before DH! is the next one the last one? how many are there?

teprometo December 5 2008, 18:40:37 UTC

Damndamndamn. As soon as Cissy said she was going to fight, I knew she wouldn't make it. I love her. She's one of my favorite characters, and it always hurts to see her die.

So sad and Draco will never admit it, but we all know Narcissa would have thrown herself in front of the curse if she could have with or without Harry's help.

One continuity issue: "staring with wide eyes as Draco stripped completely naked" except earlier it says that Draco notes he'd decided to sleep naked.