What do you mean, RPS FIC?!

Apr 14, 2012 01:46

So Let’s Set The World On Fire
Harold/Harrison RPS, smut (not only) | R | ~1,300 words
Summary: To him, it has never been a game.

A/N: For the loverly mindytindywindy in celebration of the day she left her mommy’s uterus, yay! Thank you, uterus! | Title(s) from Fun’s We Are Young which has somehow not yet made it across the ocean into Europe’s charts. Crazy, I ( Read more... )

qaf fic: gale/randy rps

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rinmonsterer April 14 2012, 01:30:16 UTC
Oh my god. I feel duped. Again, I was fooled by your fake stories about insecurity! Never again!

This was amazing :(

And you inspire me.

And I think there should never be more than one sentence in a paragraph.

P.S.FIRST!

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rinmonsterer April 14 2012, 01:38:54 UTC
And I think this characterization of Gale is something I've never seen in your fics. I love how he is at once withdrawn and determined and reading his pov feels a bit like getting in the mind of a predator. He's observing his actions from the outside, every step is thoroughly calculated, but at the same time the passion is getting closer to the surface with every paragraph and wow.

...or maybe I shouldn't be commenting after watching Shutter Island? :P

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sakesushimaki April 14 2012, 08:07:14 UTC
;_; Thank youuuuuu omg! My stories aren't fake, I swear! Which is why I am so very grateful for your awesome comments! <333

I hope Mindy likes it, too, waah.

And you inspire me.
;_; forever

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pet0511 April 14 2012, 11:27:22 UTC
I thought about your post a few days before, my answer and your reply. I changed my mind a bit. I'm still feeling limited because my English vocabulary isn't big enough but I also see your point that sometimes you just can't point out the point you really want to point out, you know? This is exactly one of the moments! I read this and just feel too helpless to even make an attempt, well aware before I even start that in the end I'm just not be able to make my point. It's kind of a frustrating feeling and it makes me consider to not comment at all. But then...I just can't.....

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guavejuice April 14 2012, 10:13:06 UTC
Dear Ms. Sake-
Thank you for what I believe to be a rather accurate account of the events. I love how you so brilliantly described GH =)
Youre loyal fan
V.

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sakesushimaki April 14 2012, 10:47:58 UTC
Thank you so very much, V! <3

what I believe to be a rather accurate account of the events
Haha, my pleasure! :D

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trintiff April 14 2012, 11:09:09 UTC
You are simply amazing with what you can do with words! This was nothing short of genius!

HUGS!! Cindy

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sakesushimaki April 14 2012, 12:12:32 UTC
Waaah omg thank you so much! :D :D :D

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pet0511 April 14 2012, 11:33:40 UTC
Ms Sake. Maybe one day I'll be able to say what reading things like this one make me think and feel. Sadly the day still isn't here yet. Of course it's about your characterization of GH and the moments you showed but that's not it in the main place. it's about the way HOW you jungle with the words and they fall in the right places and the outcome is a masterpiece of writing.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Pet

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sakesushimaki April 14 2012, 12:31:49 UTC
Oh, you! *sniffs* You are always so generous with your feedback, it makes my lower lip wobble and my tiny wanna-be writer heart dance cha-cha and swell with hope. Thank you so so much, Pet! *squishes*

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aaa_mazing April 14 2012, 11:38:36 UTC
Not much to say considering the limitations of my vocabulary. Fabulous!

Thanks for sharing!

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sakesushimaki April 14 2012, 12:33:15 UTC
Thank youuuuu! *bounces*

:D :D :D

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