Treat

[sakkashirie]

The park teemed with people, children with their parents were lining up for rides, lovers cuddled by the benches that surrounded the area, the theme park’s mascots are everywhere waving to everyone. Above them, the night sky was clear and the stars twinkled, it was a nice evening. If only she could appreciate it but she can’t. Try as she might to

Comments

[greenps]

wahahahahahah!!!! I LOVE IT!!! XD so WILD! just how park would love it!! XD but but how come you get to be in it and me and minnie-ah dont?! :(

[sakkashirie]

because i'm the writer and you're not...LOL kidding maknae..nyahah wow ninja maknae is ninja the spot's for you keke. i'm not sure park would like this it lacks action idk..:( hehe i get to have a cameo here coz no one's writing my story....:3

[greenps]

but its got steaming misunderstood sex. nyahahaha :P i haven't started chapter 4 yet O_O have you finished chap 3 and 2??

[sakkashirie]

yup i've read all of your updates before you posted them remember? pali(hurry) with chapter four already i wanna read moooorrreee... keke XD i wonder where park is, whole day xa ala nag net? hmmm...

[younglove13]

kyaaa!!! finally unnie!!! magco-comment na aku!!! wooohhh!!! *throws confetti at myself* hahha

kyaaa!!!!! when i read this fic narember naku tong midhoyo...ung time na i was with Junsu pa...kyaa!!!

my innocent and poor Su-bear naging sex God bigla! LOL!! well well well.what can i say? alam mu naman ang gusto ku and u complied with ur gree dongsaeng's request...Lol ahahha

angry sex is really hot! kyaaa!!!! do i sounded like a pervert?? *eyeroll* kyaaa!!!!
and sa public place pa talaga!! *drooling* hahaha

at may cameo pa kayu ni kuya ditoh. hahahha.

soooo Junsu was jealous with Yoochun??? aishhhh my poor,not so innocent, Pabo Duckbutt!!!!!!!!!!

nyahahahhahahah!!!!! Kamsamnida unnie!! :D

[sakkashirie]

long comment is long *me likey* yaey yaey yaey chukahae park *throws more confetti at you* after ten years you finally commented nyahahaha.

yes, as a matter of fact you do sound like a perv nyehehhe.

IKR! but but he was a flirt in miduhyo right? he was moving too fast on you there too nyahah..of course i get to have a cameo since, i told maknae this already but at the risk of repeatin g myself i'll say it again, no one's writing my story so there keke.

he was too angry to notice that it was chun-chun the icecream monster nyahaha.
mianhae though coz i couldn't really write the BDSM scene you wanted :3

glad you liked it! *haven't you always?* hehehehe.

[younglove13]

*choked on a confetti* coughscoughs!!!

ahahah! nyhahha!!! kaya naman its my turn to shine akala nya xa alng ang malandi! nyahaha

its okay unnie, as long a i get to bite him... nyahhahahaha

pervy??? wala pa to kay mia right? nyahahahha

curious lang uie... TOINKS!

while reading thise fic i was really trying hard to picture out the hot Junsu that sang Intoxication, and not the jUnsu in Ballons!!! KYAAAA!!!!!!!

ROFL

[sakkashirie]

nag succeed ba naman yong attempt mo to pictuer intoxicated Junsu instead of kawaii Su-bear? kekeke.

*throws more confetti* nyahahha

speaking of mia, read her's go hehehe i dun know if it was okay, i was kindah rushing it kagabi kasi :3

curious? umover curiosity mo nyahaha kidding. XD