[fanfiction/multi-chapters]: Myth - Chapter 14-2

[saku062]

Title: Myth - Chapter 14 (part 2)
Beta-reader: astrangerenters 
Rating: R (for blood)
Pairing: Sakumoto (main), Masatoshi, NinoxFC 
Genre: AU, action, humor
Summary: Nino POV. The group finally reaches Ariadne's land. Among King Minos and Theseus, they'll discover a truth that won't please Kazunari.
DISCLAMER: I own nothing. And the plot comes from Rick Riordan, a damn

Comments

[elyon14340]

Glad Nino finally acknowledge what he feels for her. Can't say I didn't expect Ariadne's betrayal, but it's quite easy to forgive her (at least for me), she did aid in saving Sho back then. But I pity Nino, it's like his story with her is so short-lived.

And I want you to know how happy this line made me, “Your love for Aphrodite's son.” because that's the signal for angst. Sakumoto had it easy in the previous chapters imo, it's about time the challenge arrives. :D

[saku062]

Sorry, I couldn't reply to your comment because Lj's DDOS attack >__<

Yes unfortunately for Nino his relationship with Ariadne is short, but her death was needed >_<

Ah ah don't expect to much, I'm not very fond of big angst but you're right Sakumoto had it easy the previous chapters...or did you read it correctly? Maybe you didn't see something ^_~

Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

[londyna]

NOOOOO!!!! DAMN ATHENA!!!! >.< grrrrrrrrrr
omg why Ariadne is dead??? now that Nino admitted to be in love... but they can go to Hades, right? RIGHT??
and that.... grrrr of Athena >.<
thank you for sharing dear, can't wait to read more (^.^)y

[saku062]

I know she's mean ^^"
Yep Ariadne is dead and I'm really sorry but this is not like Hercules' Disney... The main topic is Echidna so~

Thank you for reading and commenting and sorry for the late reply *kicks those hackers*

[elendiliel]

I feel bad for Nino, and it would have been interesting to see how rude Jun would be toward Ariadne had she lived, but it makes sense for her to die. I wondered what the heck was up with Sho and his powers! But now it makes sense...and of course he would want to protect Jun at any cost -- evil Athena! Poor Sho not only has guilt from before, but now he has guilt over what happened to Ariadne, and has to deal with Nino being furious with him when it wasn't even his fault! Sho is just not getting a good deal out of this demigod thing, is he? :P Poor guy. Looks like it isn't going to get better for him either, eh? XD

Can't wait for more, as usual! :)

[saku062]

I'm glad that you understand why she has to die ^^
People say that Athena is devil, i don't know why I write her so mean she's one of my fav gods actually ^^"

You're right being a demigod for Sho isn't a good thing, but I think this applies to all of them in fact ^^"

Thanks for reading and sorry for the late >_

[dekkawai]

I know it is long fic...but don't blame me if now I more desperate to know about the last few line...

Sho really give her his love for Jun ?? really? why ??

can't wait for next part ...need to read it soon...

[saku062]

I'm really, really sorry this story is quite long to update (blame my bad English! >_<)

You'll see if Sho will keep his powers or if he chooses to protect Jun in the next chapter ^^

Thank you for reading, I'll try to update ASAP!

[chibipinkpetals]

Poor girl. Nino's anger towards Sho made me slightly surprise, but understandable.
Athena! She's one of my fav.
i wonder how everything will turn out with that deal. thnx for sharing, can't wait for the next update :D

[saku062]

Well I'm sure Sho would be angry at Nino if the opposite happened...
Athena is one of my fav as well ^^"
You'll see what happen in the next chapter, hopefully you won't be disappointed ^^"

Thanks for reading and commenting!