Re: In Your Wilderness (3/3)natsunonamaeDecember 20 2011, 17:19:05 UTC
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Aa, Kouya consumes Jun. It is a fact that he steeps in his character and absorbs all the subtleties of its personal traits with every body of acting work that he is given. But there is something about Shinji that plain exhausts him. Along with the new planes and ridges in his body, he finds that he’s developed a certain unwarranted ferocity. Jun knows that he is being protective about all the wrong things, but he could not help it.
His character, Shinji, battles it out with Kenji (played by his now good friend, Koide Keisuke) in the last scene. In the play, Shinji and Kenji are close friends, almost like brothers, as they train together to win boxing matches. But in a major twist, Kenji leaves for another boxing group so that he could fight against Shinji, in the hopes of discovering something about himself, to find a reason to live. Because their hearts are that connected, Shinji somehow understands. It is a fight to live. Shinji wins that match against Kenji, but to grim results: Kenji dies in his arms, arms that delivered
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Re: In Your Wilderness (3/3)poilouseDecember 20 2011, 20:13:18 UTC
Don't expect any kind of coherency so I will list (some) of the things I liked :
Jun's insecurity. Angst but fluff at the same time. Sho. The fluidity of your writing. The beauty of your writing. WELL THAT COVERS PRETTY MUCH EVERYTHING.
Re: In Your Wilderness (3/3)ermcDecember 21 2011, 00:25:22 UTC
you are so wonderful in writing this beautiful story. i am loving it. well it is to be expected since i love stories with a little angst. and i do love how you portrayed jun's frustrations in contrast with shinji's. it is a wonderful way of conveying his inner frustrations and fears.
i love the jun visit in nazodi set as a way of apologizing. i love that otonoha and i loved that you used it here. very very effective.
Re: In Your Wilderness (3/3)harunomasuDecember 21 2011, 06:06:30 UTC
You added the info about Sho introducing Jun in the set of NazoDi!! *is happy* That's what I want to read for a long time ever since I first read the articles about that :D
This is brilliant, I love this one so much. Angst is needed in this one, and the angst makes it even more beautiful *____*
I love this too. Jun absorbing his characters and becoming them even in his daily life, the angst and the insecurity and then Sho at the end understands.
I really love Jun when he's in the acting 'zone' and I totally believe that he'd be more frustrated than pleased with Sho putting in several appearances when he's doing his best to concentrate.
And um, if you repost this put a spoiler warning on it please? I'd been trying to stay unspoiled for the plot of the play in case it got released on dvd but....ah well. Live and learn.
WOW. JUST WOW. Sorry, I just word vomit all over the place with my comment, so I'll send that as a pm to spare everyone from feeling creeped out by me. But thank you. THANK YOU SO MUCH. ♥
Aa, Kouya consumes Jun. It is a fact that he steeps in his character and absorbs all the subtleties of its personal traits with every body of acting work that he is given. But there is something about Shinji that plain exhausts him. Along with the new planes and ridges in his body, he finds that he’s developed a certain unwarranted ferocity. Jun knows that he is being protective about all the wrong things, but he could not help it.
His character, Shinji, battles it out with Kenji (played by his now good friend, Koide Keisuke) in the last scene. In the play, Shinji and Kenji are close friends, almost like brothers, as they train together to win boxing matches. But in a major twist, Kenji leaves for another boxing group so that he could fight against Shinji, in the hopes of discovering something about himself, to find a reason to live. Because their hearts are that connected, Shinji somehow understands. It is a fight to live. Shinji wins that match against Kenji, but to grim results: Kenji dies in his arms, arms that delivered ( ... )
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I love the drabblethon, I do, because awesomeness like this comes out.
I love this so much. Thank you! <3
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Jun's insecurity. Angst but fluff at the same time. Sho. The fluidity of your writing. The beauty of your writing. WELL THAT COVERS PRETTY MUCH EVERYTHING.
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i love the jun visit in nazodi set as a way of apologizing. i love that otonoha and i loved that you used it here. very very effective.
i am so in love with this story right now.
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I totally love this! :)
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You're that good!
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This is brilliant, I love this one so much. Angst is needed in this one, and the angst makes it even more beautiful *____*
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And um, if you repost this put a spoiler warning on it please? I'd been trying to stay unspoiled for the plot of the play in case it got released on dvd but....ah well. Live and learn.
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