Six Months Later - Part 9

[sakura27]

I suspect this is very OOC, but I couldn't resist...
I hope you will like it. Please let me know what you think. :)

Disclaimer: I do not own Virefinder
Warning: Strong language. Violence. No Feilong (sorry)

As raindrops fall on the window mercilessly, the distant lights of Tokyo’s midnight frenzy shine blurred into the dark room. A thin trail of smoke

Comments

[dela1]

I knew it was asami. finally they can get back together thank you

[sakura27]

Yep. For all of Feilong's seductive beauty, I couldn't resist the scenario of a hot, jealous Asami. And Akihito has suffered a lot already. Although I may have another round or two of angst coming at him still... :P

[sueona]

Wow, so good. It was great like always. I love how you have both Asami and Akihito. This story gets interesting more. Of course, I wonder did Asami leave at the end or did he close to the door to return to Akihito. I hope he decided to return to Akihito when Akihito said the last part. Can't wait for the next which I hope is soon. :D

[sakura27]

Thanks so much for reading! I am glad you liked this. I'm not really good at wordy confrontations (I'm more of the painful silence kind of person) so I was really nervous about this chapter...

[sakura27]

Geez, you guys just won't let my gorgeous OC be, will ya? :P LOL
Thanks for reading! :)
PS. I agree that Asami is a bastard.
Asami would agree to this as well.

[sakura27]

A ninja, huh? Mmmm... I'll give it some thought.

Maybe I can convince the ninja turtles to make a cameo appearance too! :P

LOL I love your comments!

[starawings]

thank god! I was getting worried that it wasn't asami who kidnapped aki!
Please hurry with the next part! This really good!
and Aki is one horny little devil *giggles* but then again who could refuse such a catch liek Asami!
*kicks Ren just to show how much he loaths him*

[sakura27]

It was about time those two confronted each other (relatively) properly, wasn't it?
I'll do my best with the next update. Hopefully I'll post it during the weekend. Thanks for reading! :)

PS. OK, I get it. Ren is doomed...

[poxiemon]

HA! i was right asami was the one.

I havent read it yet but wanted to comment anyways. Great Job (in advance)=D!!!!

[sakura27]

*giggles* Let me know what you think when you read it, OK?

[poxiemon]

So can i expect some smutty goodness for the next chap? *drools*

And i'll repeat, GREAT JOB!!!!!!!! finally asami explains himself. I love his jealous side - i'll kill your lovers <3. Cracks me up because i think he really would do it too.

[sakura27]

Thanks!!!! I love his jealous side too! So sexy...
More coming up soon. (no promised about smut, though :)