Six Months Later - Part 10 (more like 10a)

Dec 21, 2007 14:01

Previous Parts: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, Eight, Nine.


The light pink walls of the corridor echo the strides of the tall man, slow and unusually hesitant. One palm wipes away the sweat from his temples, the other curled in a fist hides in his pocket. His feet lead him to the elevator but his mind is stuck on what he left behind: the ( Read more... )

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yay yosu2 December 21 2007, 19:39:11 UTC
Really, i had to stop myself from bugging you to update sooner!!
Aaaa, Asami is crying, how sweet!!!

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Re: yay sakura27 December 21 2007, 19:46:42 UTC
:) Good to see you here! I hope you're doing well!

Yeah, I thought the elevator would be a good place for a yakuza to have a breakdown... Isolated, claustrophobic, but a brief ride nevertheless.

I'll try to update soon, although I really don't think I can write more than this per day. Life is crazy right now! :)

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lalachan December 21 2007, 19:40:34 UTC
I liked this chapter very much, thx for the update ^^ OMG cant wait to see/read what happens next.
Asami crying is so damn cute *hugs* XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

And i just wanna say this: "Hurry up and decide, Akihito. You’re killing me" ;p

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sakura27 December 21 2007, 19:47:56 UTC
I must warn you that Akihito might to take his time...
(so that I write more angst *smiles devilishly*)

thanks so much for reading! :)

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sueona December 21 2007, 20:04:24 UTC
Wow, great chapter, but so sad. Please let Aki go to Asami and they make up. I love it and hope you have an update soon. :D

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sakura27 December 21 2007, 20:10:32 UTC
Thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
If *you* make *your* Asami apologize to Akihito for the dreadful things he said, I maaaay consider getting those two together.

Otherwise... *darts threatening looks at poor sueona*

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sueona December 21 2007, 20:21:39 UTC
If *you* make *your* Asami apologize to Akihito for the dreadful things he said, I maaaay consider getting those two together.

Otherwise... *darts threatening looks at poor sueona*

Wow, you are blackmailing me here! lol.

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sakura27 December 21 2007, 20:25:08 UTC
LOL Let's call it "the Asami effect"...

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sakura27 December 21 2007, 21:34:55 UTC
Yeah, sorry... I got swamped with work. Things are a bit better now but still very busy. I'll try to write a small update everyday, though.

I like your userpic! :) That's exactly what's on my mind...

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sakura27 December 21 2007, 23:04:50 UTC
LOL I get it, I get it...

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starawings December 21 2007, 21:41:07 UTC
*makes weird noises* ASAMI!! you cried! *runs top asami and hugs him* hope this will make you feel better! atleast till aki comes back to you!

Please update more sooner next time! I need to knwo if aki is going to stay with asami! he needs to stay with asami If he won't i'll glue them together!!

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sakura27 December 21 2007, 23:17:50 UTC
I promise I'll try to post something everyday, even something as short as this.

By the way, weren't you the one who was slapping Asami a few chapters ago? You couldn't miss the opportunity to lay your hands on him, could you?
Can't blame ya! :P

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