Six Months Later - Part 10.5

Dec 21, 2007 20:38



Hot flesh drenched in sweat covers his entire being, pressing hard upon his chest, invading his inmost body, moving inside him in a frantic dance beyond control. Two large hands have trapped his legs in their firm grip, and wild lips ravage his own in ferocious kisses. With his eyes closed, he drowns in the utmost pleasure of being devoured by the ( Read more... )

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sueona December 22 2007, 02:16:49 UTC
*Jumping around my room* YAH! Aki is going to Asami! Oh, please let him get to tell Asami he loves him and will stay with him! Great chapter and thanks for the dedication! *Hugs you tightly for the wonderful story*

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sakura27 December 22 2007, 02:22:52 UTC
LOL I couldn't resist writing this after reading your totally hot chapter! ;) *hugging and smiling*

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sueona December 22 2007, 02:30:18 UTC
Your story is great.

Thanks for thinking my chapter was hot. ;) *hugs and smiles*

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yosu2 December 22 2007, 02:35:32 UTC
héhéh, so fast!! I hope you don't plan to add more drama, like someone kidnapping Aki on his way to Asami huh, at least, let the make out a bit bethore your sadistic side streak ^w^

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sakura27 December 22 2007, 02:38:14 UTC
muahahahaha [= sadistic, evil laughter]

my dear yosu2, did you actually think it will all be solved so easily?!? Love is a road full of pain and agony!
So enjoy this happy little chapter while you can...

*supply more sadistic, evil laughter here*

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yosu2 December 22 2007, 02:49:12 UTC
i know, i know, i'll enjoy this while i can...however,*kukukukuku* now YOU are condemned to continue the story, and a long one ^w^, *muahahahahha* yes, love is a road full of pain and agony, please *snickers*,do your best *bow²* !!!

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sakura27 December 22 2007, 03:01:12 UTC
LOL! You are sneaky! :)
I will do my best, I promise!!!! *hugs*

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kaza85 December 22 2007, 02:53:00 UTC
awwe that was a sweet ending, quite fitting for a chapter that started out with such a delicious start =)
Wickedly fast update and can't wait for the finale, I'm sure with all emotions flying around its gonna be one hell of a rollercoaster ride.. and hmmmm makeup sex hehe that's gonna be one hellova ride for em to *coughs me and my bad mind* anywayz enjoyed and looking forward to more :)

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sakura27 December 22 2007, 03:01:53 UTC
Glad you liked it! Yes, the reunion ought to be hot and smexy, right? ;)
More soon!

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wickedwahine808 December 22 2007, 04:48:20 UTC
WOW, this update was FAST. THANK YOU THANK YOU. {bowing with respect}Although brief you still get my adrinline pumping and my heart racing. Love it!

Now if you will excuse me, I feel the need to light up a cigarette after reading the smex. {smirk}

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sakura27 December 22 2007, 13:46:41 UTC
LOL Glad you enjoyed it ... THAT much!!! ;)

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dela1 December 22 2007, 05:14:44 UTC
wow you came back fast with this one thank you so much

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sakura27 December 22 2007, 13:47:29 UTC
I must say this: your userpic is FANTASTIC! Unbelievably hot!!!
More coming up soon(ish)!

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