Six Months Later - Part 12

Dec 23, 2007 18:26



When Shangan Hotel’s Golden Ballroom explodes with wild applause and loud cries of approbation, a deep sigh of relief escapes the wide chest of the yakuza. As much as he loves expensive cloths and signature accessories, he can’t stand the boredom of the runaway or, in fact, the poor taste of untalented designers, such as Mijaki-sensei. Focus, ( Read more... )

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susuke2466 December 24 2007, 01:02:34 UTC
Lady your fics are amazing!I'm hooked. I hadn't had a chance to read your otherstories as yet so I started with this one from the start. Thank you so much. Can hardly wait for your update.

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 01:22:11 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad to hear you are enjoying my fanfic so far. This is my first story ever, so you really haven't missed anything ;)

I will try to update soon. I hope you'll enjoy what's coming up just as much!

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darkangel105 December 24 2007, 01:11:59 UTC
That was a great chapter on Asami, I'm glad that he was able to get to the bottom of what happened, yea Ren should have gotten a little bit more, but on the other hand his feeling were hurt and rejection sometimes hurts more. I'll be waiting =P..

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 01:23:35 UTC
LOL It seems like there will be an angry crowd waiting to (b)eat up Ren by the end of this story! :)

I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter! I'll try to update soon.

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dela1 December 24 2007, 02:01:22 UTC
that was great I loved when asami would have hurt him more but I do love this story cant wait for more

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 14:30:49 UTC
Thanks for reading! *eyes zoom on the hand-on-tight-ass pic again*

*sigh*

Merry Christmas!

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goldfinch3 December 24 2007, 02:33:47 UTC
*catatonic state over* Thanks yaoi fairy! Poor Aki, but I hope he makes Asami grovel some more for what he did. On second thought, I want the make up sex...uh scene! I meant scene! 'yeah,good cover' *mumbles to self*

Excellent as always! I tried to dislike Ren on principle, but hey you can't blame the guy for falling for the Ultimate Seme right?

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 14:32:10 UTC
That's right! The ultimate seme is irresistible! :) Geez, I'd be all over him, if I had a chance... (did you hear that, Santa?)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! More coming up soon!
Merry Christmas!

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lilt_rill December 24 2007, 02:35:33 UTC
Oh, this is lovely. I'm so glad that you chose to focus on the biggest difficulty of their relationship; Asami's darker side has to be taken into account. And that line, "Please believe in me" is so interesting, because Asami's asking Akihito to trust him about Ren and that relationship, but Akihito's actually debating the more important question. Hehehe... I wonder what Asami's reaction to that would be? I don't know if he'd think that Akihito's acceptance of his morals were important.

And you've been so good about updating... I can't wait for more!

P.S. Sorry I seemed to vanish, I had finals and then traveling back to the States :( But I'm caught up now!

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 14:33:50 UTC
There you are! :) I hope you had a good time in your trips!

I'm glad you like my angle. I don't know yet where it goes from here, but I'll figure out something soon. Thanks so much for reading!

Merry Christmas!!!

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