Six Months Later - Part 13

[sakura27]

One last streak of smoke makes its vehement escape from the man’s lips, then crashes on the cold, grey door and dispels into the chilly night breeze. The cigarette falls on the floor and dies with a sigh. The large figure stands still, staring at the key clenched in his sweaty palm. Slowly, he raises his fist and knocks on the metal surface softly

Comments

[rose_erato]

Wow, this is really good. I feel Akihito's pain and I understand why he's saying what he's saying, but I feel so bad for both him and Asami. This is excellant work!

[sakura27]

*bows* thank you! I was rather nervous about this chapter. I am very glad that you liked it! :)

[sueona]

Wow, this was great. I felt all of Asami and Akihito's emotions. It was so sad that I was ready to cry too. I hope Aki sees that he does really love Asami too. Please update soon.

[sakura27]

I'm glad you liked it! Please don't cry... I'll try to update very soon! :)

[starawings]

aki! *hugs poor aki* why are you tormenting aki like this?! *sniffles* asami make aki feel better, Now! *bites her trembling lip*

please hurry with teh next part! and when are you going to sell ren! I want him just to make him pay for hurting aki like this!

but now I'm going to sit in a corner to cry because I can feel aki's pain! *goes to a corner and starts sobbing*

[sakura27]

*hugs satawings*
Please don't cry! They need to sort this out, don't they? It may be a bit painful, but it has to be solved...

I'll try to update very soon. As for Ren, I think I'll wait until the rage of my readers has been soothed a bit... Otherwise, he's toast!

[starawings]

yes, they need to solve their problems soon!
and who care about what happens to Ren! he's EVIL!! he tries to take Asami from poor Aki!

but can I borrow ren from you? my best friend is coming to stay with me for a few days and my room... Well lets just say its a disaster area ^^'

[sakura27]

Oh sure!
*passes on Ren, mop, bucket, and scrub* Now, my gorgeous model, this is your new mistress, starawings. You will do as she pleases.

Problem solved. Have fun with your friend!!!! :)

[mssupafan]

Short but FAB non the less! Poor Akihito! Struggling with his feelings for Asami. I think the love he has for Asami doesn't need to be unconditional. If you get that kind of love it's great. But love is also about compromise. I hope Asami can explain that to Aki!

I love your story! Keep up the good work! :)

[sakura27]

*bows* Thank you! I'm glad you liked this chapter! I agree with you, those two should have a heart-to-heart very soon. Maybe in the next part...

Will try to update soon. Thank you very much for reading!

[wana10]

*sobs* that was painful...too much tears on aki's part, too much heartache on asami's. must have hurt to give up lover :( maaaan why did ren have go and confess *scowl*

very emotional, very well written. i will be upset for a while after reading this particular piece actually. so glad you are sharing with us. i will pray for aki's happiness.

[sakura27]

*hugs wana10* Noooo, I didn't mean to make you cry! :O

Thank you so much for reading! I will try to update soon!