Six Months Later - Part 14 (END)

Dec 27, 2007 14:37

 Disclaimer: I don't own Viewfinder
Warning: OOC-ness, smex, angst

“Good.”

Asami's response snaps Akihito out of his lament. “Wha- What?” When his gaze seeks the man’s eyes for answers, all he can see is stern, solid, unwavering seriousness. “There’s no such thing as unconditional love, Akihito. It’s a fantasy for the clueless and the ( Read more... )

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amaniblue December 27 2007, 20:12:06 UTC
Squeeee! Blood, sweat, tears, and semen! What more can a fangirl want? *Sigh* shouldn't be reading during lunch... but what the hell... much love.

This whole fic has been an emotional joyride. The culmination of their confrontation was perfect. Thank you for sharing.

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sakura27 December 27 2007, 20:15:40 UTC
:) Thank you so much for reading! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!

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sakura27 December 27 2007, 23:28:52 UTC
YAY! I'm glad you were happy with the last chapter too.
Thanks soooo much for reading! And for all your good words! *blushes*

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darkangel105 December 27 2007, 20:51:23 UTC
Yea you had my heart stop right in the beginning when Asami said "Good" my instinct was what is this guy thinking...But it turned out to be a good scene with how he really wants the relationship to be.A really good fanfic with a lot of true emotion and congratulations for completing it. =) *hugs*

....and thank god for mobile internet and palm phones =P

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sakura27 December 27 2007, 23:30:34 UTC
I was bouncing around when that idea hit me. "Good" was the least expected response! XD

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed my story! *hugs back*

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sueona December 27 2007, 20:56:15 UTC
Oh, this was so great! I loved it and loved it more! You should do another story! I just love your writing. :D

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sakura27 December 27 2007, 23:31:29 UTC
Thank you very much!!! I'm afraid I'll probably won't be free to write until late January, but I look forward to reading your stuff in the meantime! :)

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yudashin December 27 2007, 21:23:19 UTC
Wow! This was a roller coaster ride of a fanfic! *wheeeeee* ^__^ Thank you so much. I enjoyed every bit of it. Asami is such a sweetheart deep down. Your fanfic has been deemed one of my all time favorites. I hope you will write more. Being that this was your first fanfic to write, you have so much talent!

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sakura27 December 27 2007, 23:32:45 UTC
*bows* thank you for all your good words *blushes*
I am very glad you liked my story! :)

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