Comments | sakura27: VF fiction (Asami x Akihito)

sakura27

VF fiction (Asami x Akihito)

Oct 25, 2011 19:22

Hi everyone. I bring you a fic that deals with the aftermath of the Onsen Incident (see Finder no Netsujou Extra Limited Edition)
Warning: OOC-ness (or maybe not???) and lack of smex!

( I'll Cherish You )

Comments 43

donhisiewen October 26 2011, 02:54:10 UTC

sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:40:21 UTC

Glad you agree with my interpretation! Thanks for reading!

randrews25 October 26 2011, 03:47:04 UTC

This was spot on! I really like it :))

sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:40:31 UTC

Many thanks!!! Glad you enjoyed it!

sekainosa28 October 26 2011, 05:43:46 UTC

Oww,it is interesting story. Asami really care with Akihito.Akihito just like giveng a test to Asami :3

sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:40:46 UTC

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!

ichigojae October 26 2011, 06:09:40 UTC

I LOVE IT! obviously the onsen in the manga is really hot, but I feel like.. it was a bit out of place. So this gives me some kind of closure LOL thanks for writing this ^^

sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:41:16 UTC

I thought the threesome was rather disturbing too... I'm very glad you enjoyed my fic!

TeeHee invidqueen October 26 2011, 06:37:33 UTC

The tone is so right on. Thanks for the treat!

Re: TeeHee sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:41:31 UTC

you're welcome! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!