After Six Months - Part 2

Nov 20, 2007 22:09

Thank you all so much for your encouraging comments!!! I hope you enjoy Part 2 just as much; please let me know what you think. It's a shorter piece (it's been a busy day) but still angsty. Apologies in advance for any grammar or spelling mistakes (English is not my native tongue).

Disclaimer: I don't own Viewfinder.

His gaze wanders on the marble ( Read more... )

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sueona November 21 2007, 05:48:36 UTC
Wow, this is so good. I can feel Akihito's emotions so well. Poor Akihito. I have a feeling Asami is doing this to stop Akihito from getting hurt, but Asami is so curel. I really do hope Asami and Akihito get back together. Really good story and I can't wait for the next chapter. :D

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sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:39:48 UTC
Thank you so much!!! Will try to update soon!

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ly44 November 21 2007, 06:08:50 UTC
it's really hurt,i can feel akihito's heartache TT. Asami, you're so heartless!
i really hope akihito will be strong and show to asami that he is okay even with out him.
Thanks and Update soon!

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sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:40:18 UTC
Thank *you* for reading and commenting!!! I will try to post an update soon!

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lethalene November 21 2007, 08:06:28 UTC
I really really like this fanfic so far. Don't get me wrong. You've got the knack to make me feel for Aki and your style writing is entrancing.
But, isn't Aki turning into some kinda shoujo heroine? Ô_o
I would like him more spiteful than teary like this.
But hey, I've said I like your style and your story is so intriguing that I want to know what's happening next.

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sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:44:04 UTC
Thanks so much for your comment! Yeah, my Aki is very sentimental, but that's all going on in his head so far. He hasn't confronted Asami face to face yet. I think that a lot of his harder side may come out if that happens...

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thousandbirds November 21 2007, 08:55:05 UTC
Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon^^

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sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:44:18 UTC
I'll try to! Thanks for reading!!!

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lady75 November 21 2007, 12:30:58 UTC
Ouch! my chest hurt too >_<
Will you stop torturing the poor Aki? and get him with Asami XD
Thanx for the great ch. ^__^
update soon ^__~

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sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:46:52 UTC
LOL
Yes, my lady(75)!
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'll try to update as soon as possible!

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