Double Life is Our World

[sakura905]

“You dummy! Look what have you done to my clothes! You ruined it! You have to pay for this…..with THIS!” The angry boy dragged the innocent boy into a corner and thrashed him harshly.

“Hey! STOP! Do not beat him! I said STOP! Are you deaf or what?” I heard a voice telling the angry boy to stop beating on me. I tried to lift up my head, but I had no

Comments

[yuirichii]

Thank you so much saku~chan!!! Love you so so much *hug~kiss* ><

[sakura905]

love you too..!
hugs n kisses~

so..you like it?

[cuteasian123]

lol, good story, and a kiss around a corner eh? sneaky Chinen and Yuiri ^^ lol Daiki.

grammar mistakes are okay desu! you gots me!!! i shall beta for you~, as soon as I get back from my trip XD

once again, good job on writing this, you will improve! *gives hearts, confetti, candy...etc.*

[sakura905]

thanx Yisha~~
huhu..
and thanx again for helping me out
^__^
*hugs n kisses*

[aoki_akira]

ooh..disguise...you totally didnot fail this..it's a nice fic...poor my chii..

[sakura905]

uhhh..is it?
nway..
thanx 4 reading~~
^_^

[lovesdancing11]

You don't know how much I love people who make ChiiXOC fics. XD

Great job on this! :D

[sakura905]

LoL thanx..!
=p
glad that you like it~

and thanx for reading..!

[yutodaiki]

iloveit! sankyoo saku'chan! :D ϋϋ iloveyou ne! :D