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Fic: Five Times Rodney Suspected Something and the Moment He Finally Got It

Aug 24, 2009 04:16

Category: Fic
Title: Five Times Rodney Suspected Something and the Moment He Finally Got It
Summary: There were five times Rodney suspected something was happening with his best friend. He finally got it. J/T
Characters: Rodney McKay and the rest of the gang
Pairings: John/Teyla, Teyla/Kanaan, Rodney/Jennifer, Ronon/Amelia
Author: sakurablue13
Word Count: 4500- ( Read more... )

fanfic, sga

Comments 21

foxyinthecity August 25 2009, 03:17:58 UTC

Nice story. :D I really enjoy it. Sadly, I can so see Rodney being this obtuse. :D

2bluaeryn August 25 2009, 03:22:42 UTC

To sweet. This is why this show was so much fun and just darn good.

Thanks for the reminder.

starry_haze September 25 2009, 06:47:03 UTC

Okay, so I'm officially in love with your John and Teyla fics. I've reread each of the three too many times to count. You capture John and Teyla perfectly. (Not to mention that Rodney is hilarious in this!) I love the way you seamlessly weave the scenes you imagined and the scenes actually featured in the show into one cohesive narrative. I have a hard time telling them apart! You're also amazing with the character voices. When I read your fics, I can imagine the action and dialogue unfolding without skipping a beat because the writing is so in-character, and that truly is a testament to your grasp of the characters.

Your characterization of John/Teyla as parents is perfect and so observant. I think you're so right that John and Teyla would be the "calm, quiet type"-deeply emotional on the inside but controlled on the outside. I can totally imagine them as the type of couple to steal shy kisses ( ... )

sakurablue13 September 25 2009, 15:22:38 UTC

aww, thanks... *blushing madly*

tielan September 29 2009, 08:29:48 UTC

I should be finishing my SGA Big Bang fic, and instead I'm reading this.

It brought a smile to my face with the cuteness, and I really really needed that. Thanks for writing it, and I'm so glad I spotted it on sga_beya!

sakurablue13 September 29 2009, 08:39:36 UTC

thank you...
and good luck with the SGA Big Bang fic ^^

johnsheppardluv October 18 2009, 18:07:59 UTC

nice! :D i really liked the way you wrote it,
as well as the six moments you chose. they
were very telling and wonderfully played out. :D

Bravo, Sakura! *claps* *& gives huggles
to ya for a great story...well-told* :)

~Sharma

sakurablue13 October 18 2009, 18:53:39 UTC

hah! you really know to make my day, don't you?
thanks ^^