Who Stole My kiss? Chapter 1

[sakuracelestial]

Title:  Who Stole My kiss?
Author:  sakuracelestial
Pairing: Everyone+Yeosob = <3 :)
Rating:  PG13 (Due to extreme xD)
Summary:  Beast is the now rising newbie idol in kpop industry. But that's not the story talking here. It's about the one of member of the group, The cutie one, Yang Yeosob has his dilemma on which he falls asleep in the studio During SHOCK

Comments

[ohmygod_sun]

LOL this is funny XD
i wonder who's the culprit..
i hope it's Doojoon
it's kinda weird for me at first, reading Yoseob addresses Junhyung and Hyunseung as 'hyung', and reading Junhyung calls Doojoon 'hyung' LOL.
looking forward for the next chapter!
what about putting KiSeob together? although i'm still hoping it will turns into DooSeob
kekeke :D good job!

[sakuracelestial]

lol me too =____=" it just so weird when i was typing that xD i thought i am the only one who think like that xD fufufu~ xD
guess you have read to find out more :P

[rustyrabbit]

Gyaaah~!
I hope Kwangie is the culprit!
Hehe, KiSeob FTW!!!!!

Hmm, side couple?
I vote for DooJoon & JunHyung!
=D

[mrsmustang]

Ok this was really hilarious I shouldn't have read this in class ROFL!! XD
I love it~ and now I will read the rest of the chappies~ ^^

[fay_of_sunshine]

Really great plot, although there were a lot of technical mistakes as far as grammar and present tense-things like that. It made it kind of hard to understand at times. Perhaps, you should think about getting a beta to help with that.
Oh dooseob~cuuutteeee!
how can someone kiss you passionately AND! lick your lips yet you don't feel it?!-silly yoseob! lmao

Imbri trifle times together like another which leads fed the mbc.

[anonymous]

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