Yay for Tanker-love.

[sakusei_sol]

I’m seriously terrified. I REALLY hope I didn’t butcher Tanzie… >__< I’m SO sorry if I did…but it’s really hard with a story like this…I don’t actually know what Tanzie would do…so…read on…
Hope...you don't cry...My Lave...?

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[sojourner_cries]

I can't comment on characterization, but the plot is lovely!
Poor baby :( . I love the whole sweetness of it. Although, the dogs are kind of creepy O.o .
Can I point out a few little typos?
"chocked" = choked?
"he had previously lie" = I think that 'laid' is correct, but I'm not sure O.o .
"cry in anything buy" = but?
Anyway, I like it! <333

[sakusei_sol]

I knew the 'chocked' was there but I was too tired last night to fix that.
I was wondering about 'lie' too but didn't feel like opening word again to see what it thought.
And...I didn't see they buy. :3 Thank you.

And thanks for reading and liking! :D <333333
Love you~

[sojourner_cries]

Welcome!
And I *always* like to read. Sometimes it just takes me a while.
Love you!

[sojourner_cries]

Oh - by the by, I ran it through my word - except for the lyric parts - and it said that it has a reading level of 7.5 . I don't know how much I trust it, though.