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[skater_g8r]

oh! god! WOW!!! that was awesome! the fist part was amazingly descriptive I just loved the gentleness of it, and wistfulness i think is the right word? and the second part was V...Very HOT!!!
It just really took me in from the first line! really really loved it..WOW!!!
::goes off to dream::

[skater_g8r]

*searches for "wistfulness" in her dictionnary*
Oh yes, that's the right word to me. I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you very much for your kind words and for writing, Skater.

Kisses,
Lyon

[tefnut_]

This was so beautifully sad! So sadly beautiful. The closest adjective I can think of to describe your writing is "velvety". A deep red, warm velvet.

[tefnut_]

Ohhh, what a lovely description, Tefnut. Thank you very much.

Kisses,
Lyon

[ex_kyrieane267]

apparently, I'm not the only one who thought this fic was rec worthy!

http://www.livejournal.com/users/spikedluv/80077.html?#cutid1

spikedluv also thought so!

::mwah::

[ex_kyrieane267]

Oh wow again! *blushes again* lol!

Thank you very much for the link, Kyri.

Kisses,
Lyon

[shinji_hiroshi]

At last! A decent Daniel/Jack fic. I loved it, wonderful work. I hope to see more J/D fic's from you ^_^ keep up the good work! We need good FanFiction writer's!

[shinji_hiroshi]

Thank you very much for your kind words, Shinji_hiroshi, I'm very glad you liked this story... I hope it wasn't a "one off", and that I'll be able to write something enjoyable in the future lol! Thank you for writing.

Kisses,
Lyon

[1trackmind]

Wow. That was so tender and heartbreaking.

For one moment in our lives, one fleeting moment, he was mine and I was his, and the memory of it will have to last the rest of our lives.

Like a dream, a one and only blissful moment, a dream we can never make again.

That seems so cruel! *whimper* It makes absolute sense of course, but still very sad.

I love the whole thing, but especially part one. You've captured Daniel perfectly. The man is nothing if not a study in contradiction.

[mithrilofmoria]

I totally agree! Cruel! Oh The wretched humanity! You're writing has a gossamer quality to it. Like I'm reading it from behind a veil of sheer palpable air. It's very lazy and slow which fits perfectly and I appreciate. It's tender and sweet and real-- and that makes all the difference.

[1trackmind]

That's a very nice image you used to describe the way you felt while reading it! Thank you for your kind words and for writing, Mithrilofmoria.

Kisses,
Lyon

[1trackmind]

You know, it was heartbreaking to write lol! I'm very glad you liked it and recognized Daniel, that's really the way I see him, too. Thank you very much for writing, Schnaucl.

Kisses,
Lyon