Great beginning
anonymous
February 6 2006, 18:06:52 UTC
Hey,
Just a note to say I like this and can't wait to read more. There're a few spelling errors, but no biggie. :) Keep writing; this story has promise. . .a lot of promise, yes, precious. . .
Re: Great beginningsally80_3March 12 2006, 01:09:21 UTC
Hi, I just wanted to thank you for your review of my journal about my story What lurks in the shadows. I thought you may want to know that i have updated it-so there's a new chapter.
You know my opinion about chapter 1 :) I want say i enjoyed very much reading chapter 2. I loved how Ron was concerned about his love and mainly i loved how he saved her *sigh* Well not totally save but he avoided Hermione could being in more pain than she was already suffering. *reading chapter 3*
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Just a note to say I like this and can't wait to read more. There're a few spelling errors, but no biggie. :) Keep writing; this story has promise. . .a lot of promise, yes, precious. . .
Sincerely,
-Iliana-
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I just wanted to thank you for your review of my journal about my story What lurks in the shadows. I thought you may want to know that i have updated it-so there's a new chapter.
len09rob (from checkmated)
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I want say i enjoyed very much reading chapter 2.
I loved how Ron was concerned about his love and mainly i loved how he saved her *sigh*
Well not totally save but he avoided Hermione could being in more pain than she was already suffering.
*reading chapter 3*
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