Love for our week. GUESS WHAT IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE.

Dec 06, 2005 17:38

And you said you loved me but we all knew you were lying, but that was okay because we could just pretend, just like everyone else. And I said I love you too and we let ourselves believe it was just that. I see them, flaunting their infatuations like they're meant to be, they don't know, they don't know the shiver you sent down my spine but that's ( Read more... )

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ohhdaarling December 6 2005, 10:54:02 UTC
"You there, you think that she will make you happy, but you know what? She won't. He won't make your life a fairytale. Neither will her or him. Love doesn't make a fairytale, love is heaven and hell and elation and depression and EVERYTHING. Living makes a fairytale."
That made me re-think everything i was thinking off before i read this.

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You, baby. tipzytamagotchi December 6 2005, 11:30:49 UTC
Are one of a kind.

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kris_keberos December 6 2005, 13:32:08 UTC
That's deep.

And here I am, well into my 20s, and I'm still having issues such as this smacking me in the face every day.

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give_him_a_fish December 10 2005, 09:18:40 UTC
that was really excellent, wow there were some great lines in there. It ust seemed like u hell rushed it coz u had all of it going through your head therefore it didnt really flow...If you re-wrote it slower i think it could be some awesome little thingoo...

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sally_vs_muffin December 11 2005, 01:29:17 UTC
It was kinda supposed to be one huge run-on sentence. Like YES YOU CAN but not shit. I wrote it just kinda..on the spot so it could definetely use some rewriting but I don't particularly feel like rewriting it yet so poo to everyone *pokes tongue out* :P

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