Aw. That was kind of beautiful, even if it was just a short description of them making out in bed haha. Onew's POV was funny and cute lol. I really liked this ♥
This fic is so cute! <3 The addition of Onew at the end is just so precious. 8'D
Anyway, I saw you left a comment on one of my TaeKey stories but deleted it, so I wanted to reply somehow. I really felt compelled to because what you said was really very nice. I'm really pleasantly surprised that someone would take such an interest in my weird little fanfictions... And to have someone express that makes me really happy and motivated to write more ;o; So really what I'm saying is thanks for leaving such a nice comment, even if you did delete it T T
Eventually, it ended (Finally! Thank the gods in heaven!) and Onew saw Taemin snuggle into Key's neck. Key then pulled down Tae's disheveled shirt and pulled up the covers over both of them. A few moments later, not a sound or movement from them.
Onew, on the other hand, is wide awake and seething.
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*sigh* tsk. onew don´t know what´s good and AWESOME AND HOT!~~
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i can totally imagine Leader that way: Not shocked because he just saw two males making out, but irritated because he was ignored and disturbed. haha!
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Anyway, I saw you left a comment on one of my TaeKey stories but deleted it, so I wanted to reply somehow. I really felt compelled to because what you said was really very nice. I'm really pleasantly surprised that someone would take such an interest in my weird little fanfictions... And to have someone express that makes me really happy and motivated to write more ;o; So really what I'm saying is thanks for leaving such a nice comment, even if you did delete it T T
I'll finish Obsession because of you! (:
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i'm happy to know that my comment made you happy. i think i haven't made anyone happy for quite a while.
so now i'm excited about the continuation of Obsession! (*channels purple magic powers to inspire you more*)
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Eventually, it ended (Finally! Thank the gods in heaven!) and Onew saw Taemin snuggle into Key's neck. Key then pulled down Tae's disheveled shirt and pulled up the covers over both of them. A few moments later, not a sound or movement from them.
Onew, on the other hand, is wide awake and seething.
How am I supposed to go back to sleep now?!
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