008 Audacity

May 18, 2013 07:56

Audacity
PG-13 | EunHae | AU; Angst
Summary: In which maybe they want to try and go back to the start.  But they don’t even try.
A/N: This is pointless; sorry, but I had to.

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“Maybe we’re ending.” )

length: oneshot, for: fanficfridays, pairing:eunhae

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this shouldn't scare you saltedboots May 18 2013, 23:46:08 UTC
Half of it is a confession, but the other half is just my imagination. I hope we're not back to angst because I liked writing fluff for a moment there.

but anyway i won't dare become hyukjae because you won't let me anyway

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oh shush saltedboots May 19 2013, 11:45:59 UTC
The two idiots in this story are just idiots okay. it has nothing to do with me

You don't know which half is a confession and which one isn't? And I'm not gonna start telling you, it's not feelings night.

now i'm scared; but i probably won't cry

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marj are you sad again? natsuberry May 18 2013, 03:55:09 UTC
do you have a bias for tiffany? i see her in your fics a lot

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i'm perpetually sad though; but it's not so bad saltedboots May 18 2013, 23:42:29 UTC
i don't have a bias for tiffany; but i think i don't detest her anymore she's pretty;

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daylajames13 May 19 2013, 04:28:31 UTC
They seperated...
Despite loving each other they seperated...
This is so sad

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andybianca May 19 2013, 09:39:28 UTC
agrees to this.

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saltedboots May 20 2013, 02:09:56 UTC
I think people do that, too, in real life, sometimes? Because, sometimes it isn't enough to just... love each other? (But I don't know that) Anyway, thank you for reading this bit! :D

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saltedboots May 20 2013, 10:31:05 UTC
I kinda feel bad that this is what you read among other eunhae fics because this is obviously a mess because basically your comment is more beautiful than the story itself

but thank you! ^^

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saltedboots May 21 2013, 09:46:25 UTC
a beautiful mess, then? :D
jsyk i was telling the absolute truth

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lamppy May 20 2013, 19:45:18 UTC
Is it rude of me to suggest you what I would like to see from you? I mean, I'm never like this, I always love everything and I never complain about things I enjoy, and your stories are definitely one of those things ( ... )

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wow this is very long i mean thank you for your effort :) saltedboots May 21 2013, 09:44:24 UTC
I guess you can always suggest things to me; I'd accept anything. By the way, I think I get what you're trying to say, like... the stories are incomplete or something or just yeah that; it's confusing, I guess? What you should know is that I don't even get the things I write like most of the time, so it's difficult to explain things? That and I also suck at explaining things (BTW you shouldn't be jealous at all I mean if I can do this, you undoubtedly can, too).

(Your being a fluff loving person kinda explain your feelings towards my tragic fics, then! And I don't take offence at comments and criticisms most of the time so it's fine ^^)

I was advised that this fic is kind of too heavy? I mean, I don't really know, I was sad as I was writing this so maybe that's why it ended up like so. Still I went against that wise advice and posted this story anyway (because I can't keep deleting finished fics just because I don't particularly like them or they're "lacking" because I don't like things i write most of the time and they're almost ( ... )

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Re: wow this is very long i mean thank you for your effort :) lamppy May 21 2013, 22:14:38 UTC
Well, it's not like I feel something is wrong with any of your stories or I want them to be different.. It's just that I always want to say "please, please Hyukjae do something different, make things better" or "say something different! don't leave him or love him more!" (something like that? It's partly because I'm lacking heavily in English, so I'm not able to fully express myself ( ... )

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:) saltedboots May 22 2013, 22:34:19 UTC
I promise to not write against the will of my haywire brain when it comes to these stories. Some people just tend to be the opposite of self-aggrandizing bastards; so I guess I'm one of those. XD

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