009 Breathing

[saltedboots]

Breathing
PG-13 | EunHae | AU; Friendship; Angst
Summary: In which Donghae doesn’t demand and Hyukjae does the choosing.
A/N: It might or might not be about the great zombie apocalypse.

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Comments

hello, lamppy here with her long ass comment :D

[lamppy]

It was soo good story! I've got goosebumps when I think about how evenly you can provide your plot, using little words and describing so much through them. Excellent work

Aaand thank you

[saltedboots]

Hyukjae is kind of an asshole in this fic (most of the time, he is). But not really? Okay I didn't know if you noticed but he was "conflicted" with feelings he didn't think he'd have so he kind of escaped or drifted away because boy that was easy! :) However, the girlfriend is not likable, but she's still sensitive towards the end; maybe, breaking up with Hyukjae got her senses back. Maybe.

Okay so you have a weak heart literally? If so, then you should stay away from things that would trigger emotions (i.e., inexplicably angsty stories which may - or may not, include my stories). If figuratively, then yeah I'm sorry. Still, Donghae being sick could've been foreshadowed by his staying at home or by his not having big college dreams.

About the ex-girlfriend, well, that's simple. I mean, they broke up a few weeks(?) prior and she could or could not have asked him the ever so important question WHY? and he might or might not have said because he's harboring feelings for Donghae. (At least, that's how I imagine it. Because they were

You're welcome

[lamppy]

Yeah, I understand why Hyukjae left and didn't come back for the whole year. I guess I really understand him, since I tend to do similar things myself - like not talking to people for a long time, not answering phones just to avoid hard topics and just basically running away from confrontation, and the longer it lasts the easier it is. I understand him, but DONGHAE WAS SICK AND COULD HAVE DIE DURING THIS TIME! at least that's how I see it... But despite everything, he came back and if Donghae can forgive him, I can too.

I don't have literally weak heart, at least as far I know (I never checked) so don't worry, your stories won't kill me :D But yeah, I'm quite sensitive, and I tent to cry over stupid things, and sick people, old people and children make me especially weak.. so yeah..

If you think my comments on your stories are long you should see what I did on Catskilt's "Twelve Cupcakes" muehehe But, yeah, I don't mind writing them :)

Re: You're welcome

[saltedboots]

Okay, now I see your point. Donghae could've died during that time they weren't seeing each other, that's a legit point, btw.

That's actually a relief because I'm not good around people with literal weak hearts. XD

Oh but ofc she's her though she deserves as much love as possible. :D Thank you, then!

^^

[myheart_eunhae]

Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..............................

I love you..i know that you already know how much i love your writing style....

but dear..ughh this is just...sadjkfgbkasdjgldf

another painful and yet fluffy fic..i dont know ..

the way you portrayed the characters...the confusion... the wanting....

everything..im loss for words again dear...

and oh... i miss you so much :'(

GEN! *_*

[saltedboots]

Yeah I know you can have it I don't want it ;;

Thank you for like putting in a comment though I know you're life is kind of not stable the last time we talked and yeah I'm just glad you can read fics again! ^^ Anyway, yeah this one is rather painful too but it ended okay. Thus, all is okay.

IMY too. ;;

oh demi lovs

[doubledutchh]

spot for me wait i'll read this later

[doubledutchh]

The fault in donghae's console, probably, thats why he couldnt kill as much zombies as hyuk could.

Ugh I wish hyukjae couldve not been the dificult one (hence changing the plot) but it's just that hae is somehow dying and hyukjae is flirting well okay i love how kyuhyun gets too involved in your fics.

Oh there's sungmin :3333333333333

You really should buy TFIOS

[saltedboots]

The fault isn't in Donghae's console but in his zombie-killing ability.

Oh I forgot you don't like Kyuhyun to be an asshole in fics. Well he wasn't in here. Next time maybe he can be a priest. Or a shrink. :DD

I will, in time

[doubledutchh]

Then Donghae needs training. Why is Donghae always the weak one lol

And if a priest or a shrink is the opposite of asshole, then maybe I'll just agree on him playing the asshole friend lol. No no priest no pls nor a shrink ;;;;

from you come pretty comments

[saltedboots]

idk i'm better at writing angsty stuff than anything else can i barf /highfive

Yay someone who likes my ending for once! Haha. I really lilke how this one ended since it's not yet over. How can it be? The story ends, yes, but theirs continue. Now I can dance.

this story made my heart clench. and even though i didn't tear i was close to it. oookay :( #best

Re: hardly pretty but i try

[saltedboots]

"stories are just snippets of lives" i now wish i read outside this pairing but i don't well i did a couple of times with wonkyu

eeeep thank you, i'm not good with good comments (or any kind of comment, really), as you can see

[light_on_oceans]

i'm sorry i'm not leaving a long lovely comment but this story was wonderful! i wish you'd written more but i understand how it is to just not be able to stop afterwards xD

[saltedboots]

long comments aren't required don't worry! thank you very much for leaving one. :)