013 Clarity

[saltedboots]

Clarity
PG-13 | EunHae | Non-AU
Summary: A blur of beds and breakfasts.
A/N: This is a valiant attempt at fluff, as Rach (zephyral) has suggested. I don't even know why I accepted the challenge because what is fluff, tbh. Anyway, this is gonna be the last from me in a very, very long time maybe forever lmao.

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Comments

Spot for Rach!!!

[saltedboots]

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Re: Spot for Rach!!!

[saltedboots]

you should definitely read into it because there's a lot of things in my head beyond the words and i'm like WHAT AM I DOING

but i'm glad you like it lmao but you're too kind i don't believe you hahaha i didn't even realize i was writing in second person? like, until now i don't realize how this is 2nd person lol /goes back to english class

[jaey_tan]

Been a long time since I read a EunHae Fic <3 this is so cute. AhhH.. EunHae never fail to amuse me.. esp if their love is well written from an authornim like you.

Have a nice day and thanks for sharing :)

[saltedboots]

awww you're too kind! thanks for the comment :D

[eunhae_holic86]

Its been a while since I read a fic its great and fluffy brings a warm feelings I love it thanx for sharing

scandalized by your userphoto omg wow

[saltedboots]

you're welcome. thank youuuu. :D

Re: scandalized by your userphoto omg wow

[eunhae_holic86]

LOL well he is drinking water you pervert :*

[lamppy]

Fluff really isn't your thing, huh? haha
I could feel your struggling to put there some drama and angst. It's okay, I guess, writing a really good fluff isn't that easy, because what's the point in making everything all sweet and sappy, right? Your angsty little details always make the story livelier and I'm always really thrilled to read you.
I'm not very fond of this point of view in reading because it's always confuses me to no end. And this story took me two times to get what is it really about. But, oh how I love your little details, like when Donghae doesn't make love to Hyukjae but he kisses his hand, or how Hyukjae kisses him on the airport to make up to upsetting him earlier. Just.. ahhhhhh <3

i apologize lmao

[saltedboots]

The thing is, I was struggling not to put angst but I still did because as you've pointed out, there's no point in making everything sappy. But I've yet to write a decent fluff fic. Til then, people just have to suffer fluff-angst "intermarriages" lmao.

I enjoyed writing in this POV lol sorry for all the confusion! And I'm glad you liked the little bits of details. And where is the struggle if it isn't Hyukjae wanting something else. But he just doesn't "want" Donghae, I suppose. :3 At least, in this story. Or we can be delusional, come on! :D I'm actually jealous of people writing stories for other people so yay. It's quite fun, being outside your comfort zone sometimes. But not all the time.

Thank youuu :D

[hyuk4hae]

I was actually scared to read this fic... i don't feel like reading angst while eunhae were having good time i germany ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Thank혁 for this fluffy one... love it!!!! <33333