[FIC] Star Trek: Then, Suddenly, Life Changed [5/6] (Kirk/McCoy, R)

May 09, 2010 18:16

Title: Then, Suddenly, Life Changed [5/6]
Authors: salvaged_pride and sullacat
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing/Characters: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R for language and sexual situations
Summary: In honor of the one year anniversary of the movie, an AU - What if Leonard McCoy had been at the bar that night? Two men, a cycle, and a trip that changes their lives. 9745 words -- Look ( Read more... )

kirk/mccoy, star trek xi, then suddenly life changed

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tmelange May 16 2010, 23:02:53 UTC
Very engaging story. I very much like how you've developed the McCoy/Kirk relationship, slowly and with a keen sense of how they understand one another. I look forward to reading the last part. Bravo!

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salvaged_pride May 17 2010, 13:10:31 UTC
Thank you very much! We wanted something that came together in a way that was real but deep down, life changing. Also something that built towards our ending. :3 Next chapter is up on Tuesday morning!

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zhen123 May 17 2010, 01:17:45 UTC
oh man, sad times! I can't wait to see how this is resolved!

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salvaged_pride May 17 2010, 13:10:52 UTC
I am almost as excited as the readers to get the last chapter up! Should be Tuesday morning!

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joeannk May 17 2010, 03:30:20 UTC
Nooooo! Go back, Jim!

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salvaged_pride May 17 2010, 13:12:46 UTC
You'll have to see~

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sayfray May 17 2010, 05:23:56 UTC
You're making me wait until Tuesday? This chapter was so bittersweet, Jim needs to realize their meant to be, dangit!

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salvaged_pride May 17 2010, 13:13:05 UTC
Sorry! *bows* It'll be a worthwhile wait, I promise!

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abigail89 May 17 2010, 16:47:59 UTC
Oh, Jim! Questioning is good. And you're gonna give up great sex with a great guy?

Yummy, nummy loving! And then Jim's brain takes over. Loved the interaction with Pike, though Jim is much more immune to him here, probably because he has a life he loves (and hadn't just had the crap beat out of him). Thought maybe he'd trade it for Bones....so I'm especially looking forward to the next chapter.

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salvaged_pride May 17 2010, 17:04:33 UTC
Well, the Pike scene is quite... interesting. The spoken parts, even some of the action, are based 100% on the pre-editted movie script. The spoken parts are directly said. It was a tie-in to 'reality' that I wanted to work with in this scene. As to the immune... well, you'll have to wait for the next chapter out tomorrow! :3

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