oncoming-storms; 60.3 Trapped in a Maze

Mar 01, 2009 00:16

He begins to tear the room apart. Books that have been untouched for centuries now scatter dust into the air as they thud against the sofa. Some land on their spine and fall open to once unturned pages. None of them provide anything of use. English seems to be the standard but there’s an Althgarian notebook on the top shelf and a few scrolls ( Read more... )

verse :: canon ::, comm; oncomingstorms

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handysparehand March 2 2009, 00:50:43 UTC
I love the winding nature of this, how it all spins around on itself and much like the Doctor and Annalise, you're never completely sure what order these events are happening in. Awesome and windy and I love the segues between moments. They flow in and out of each other so well.

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itsthecoat March 2 2009, 17:14:15 UTC
Kishaaaaaaaaaaaa. I am in school and it's letting me access Livejournal for once! So I wanted to leave you a message to say hi, and hope you wake up feeling much better than yesreday ♥

P.S. I did actually read the story last night! I specially like the concept, and the way that the story manges to flow smoothly even while remaining non-linear.

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