Fic: Seasons of Love (RL/SB) One-Shot

[sam_i_am_89]

Title: Seasons of Love (1/1)
Author: Sam I Am
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG ( can't be more than that!)
Genre: One-shot, Angst
Word-count: 1,125 exactly. (4 parts = 250 words each, plus a final half-part)
Summary: A song-fic challenge from my best friend: 'Seasons of Love' from "Rent".

Comments

[tetsubinatu]

This was lovely! Very poetic.

Like you, I always want to procrastinate until it is perfect and I hate to reinforce perfectionistic tendencies, but... you are right. The ending needs a little work, as it just bumps flat after the poetry - just focus on the last couple of sentences. The rest really is beautiful.

[sam_i_am_89]

The end is meant to be a little stilted, but I never could get it exactly how I wanted it. Thank you again for your lovely, useful feedback. :)

Sam x

[lil_fangirl]

That was beautiful. I really liked it! It was soo great but kinda sad!

[sam_i_am_89]

Unfortunately, I am an angst-monster, so I often write sadness (or sometimes even sadness with a happy ending!)

I'm really glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback! Every little helps...

Sam x