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sam_i_am_89

Fic: At the Close (RL/SB) One-shot

Sep 22, 2008 11:55

Title: At the Close (1/1)
Author: Sam I Am
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Summary: "You pull me through time." - The Fountain (2006)
Warnings: Canon Sirius-death
Rating: PG-13 (it's pretty tame)
Author's Notes: Originally planned to be twelve parts long. When it sat on my hard drive for a year, I decided that nine was fine. :)

( Through Time... )

at the close, rl/sb

Comments 6

mysecretashes September 22 2008, 12:47:52 UTC

I'm crying. That was heartbreakingly beautiful. It makes me sad that Sirius spent his entire life loving Remus and they never had a chance.

happi_feet September 22 2008, 18:33:04 UTC

I think you were right to stop it where you did. It didn't really need the other parts.

black_sun_rise September 22 2008, 18:53:40 UTC

I..Yeah..Um...

-Sniffs-

Poor babies

laroseminuit September 22 2008, 23:10:40 UTC

You've killed me dead.
Part 7 was heartbreaking, the two of them talking at cross-purposes like that.
Part 9, I think, you've captured perfectly the feeling of carrying a huge secret for so long.
And then the end ... alas.

carlinpaddy September 23 2008, 21:51:12 UTC

Part vii got to me the most. I know that's silly, but he was so close to telling him, it would have been the easiest time to do it. "Serius, why did you shudder when I touched you?" "Because it was you that touched me," then kiss him. What kind of Gryffendor is he that he couldn't have said and done that? They were already standing really close to each other, and it would have been quick enough that rejection would have been delayed. Could you write a continuance? Remus/Serius in the afterlife? Pretty Please?