Fic: The Truth Is I'm On My Way

[samanthahirr]

Title: The Truth Is I'm On My Way
Fandom: Bandom (MCR)
Pairing: Frank Iero/Gerard Way
Genre: High School AU, Teen Angst, Coming Out
Word count: 5,600
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language
Disclaimer: No infringement on the rights of real people intended. Not profiting in any way.

Notes: Relative ages have been changed. Written for the 2012 Bandom Reverse Big

Comments

[viviansface]

Now this was something! I really adored your writing style, it was so refreshing and SO realistic! It didn't feel like fiction at all, more like telling a story that really happened. That was nice, I guess you can tell it doesn't happen often with FANFICTIONS. :D

I fell for the plot as well. All in all, this was really good and I enjoyed every bit of it. I was even like, "Why is this only 5k? I want MORE." I loved how confident but SHY all at the same time Gerard was. And Frank being all, "You have a hickey. O.O" AHH. Yes.

[matchbox_bones]

This was cuuuuuuuute. I liked how focused on Gerard's hickey Frank was. I liked this line a lot: "I love your wolves," he says, and then oo's at a particularly gruesome blood spatter, complete with chunks of ripped flesh. and this one, too: The words tumble out before Frank can second guess them, pressed against Gerard's lips, "I want you to mark me up." (maybe I just like the idea of Frank wanting to get all marked up by Gerard >_____>) and I also loved the whole ending scene with Frank asking if Gerard's hickey looked like a zombie bite. c:

(And also it made me laugh that Frank's girlfriend's name was Megan, because my name is Megan.)