Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 23) Part 1/2

[samberrie]

mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:black">Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 23) Part 1/2
Author: samberrie (itsa me)
Pairing: All John/Paul for the time being

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Comments

[spitrainbows]

I'm too eager. I'm leaving a comment on this one.

This was a little bit too good. There were so many gorgeous metaphors, like the soggy toast one. Or was that a simile? Too lazy to go back up and check. It was a literary device, anyway.

My only complaints is WHERE IS THE SEX and why are you always leaving me hanging, you slippery tart. You'll probably update with the sexy part when I'm asleep or something, you bloody swine.

The tension tickles. Give it to me.

[samberrie]

Oh bless your soul. I was prepared for this chapter to be a barren wasteland with no comments lol.

It's a simile you fool. Aren't you supposed to be the smart one? Pitiful.
But thank you. I felt like I needed something that made hardly any sense in there, so that's where that one came from.

Well, I was getting sad because I couldn't fit enough detail in the sex because I was getting so close to 5,000 words. So I did the smart thing and split it up. And, er, I'm not even done with the next part yet. I gotta go back and add more delicious details and make it better yo. And thanks for the idea. I'LL DO IT.

Give it to you how? Are you giving me permission to get out our purple friend? Say yes.

[spitrainbows]

You know me, I wait for you in the dark bits of someone's house.

dhsdfkl I know I didn't look okay whore don't question my English smarts they're all I've got huff. Supposed to be the smart one, lol. How sweet of you.
Yes! Everything needs more of that. Like, erm, weeping... oh, nevermind.

Oh, fair enough... I can pardon it for sexy details.
AS IF YOU WEREN'T GOING TO ANYWAY. Ugh, I'm gonna have to sleep soon. lol, why do you do this. So cruel.

That purple beast is no friend of mine.

[larainefan]

I like the beginning, where Paul is obsessing over how the journalist could have gotten all that, so many impressions in the space of less than an hour. But then Paul reasons how he himself has seen how George and Ringo behave toward one another, how they are on stage, and how one would have to be blind not to see it.

So Brian is taking George and Ringo and Derek somewhere? To straighten all this out? That's pretty funny, almost like they're naughty schoolboys in trouble or something. And it's not even really their fault, it's the fault of that journalist!!!

I am so glad you updated, I've been looking for a new installment from you, so glad to be following this story! I know j/p shippers are anxiously awaiting the sex scene, and that's fine. But I also can't wait to read about Brian and Derek, George and Ringo, and where they're off to! :)

[samberrie]

Thank you. I felt like Paul was the only one out of the loop at the moment so I had to clue him in somehow, if only vaguely.

Uh huh. I decided to bring back an OC. Big Jimmy, hurray! You know, the rich guy with connections and whatnot. So yes, their trip + last HB concert + G/R-ness will be the next chapter if I can fit it all in. Might have to drag it out to two chapters, rats!

I'm no hardcore J/P shipper myself, there's far too much of it in my opinion lol, but I know that's what most people reading want so who am I to defy them? But George and Ringo will definitely have some more nice moments in the future!

Thank you for commenting on this short little part lol. Much appreciated.

[samberrie]

I posted it around 9 o' clock my time. Not sure what timezone you're in, but I'm in Mountain time near the west coast.

But yes, I hope it will be!

[okiforeva]

*Dramatic entrance* I HAVE ARRIVED!

Why must your writing be so gosh darn amazing... Seriously girl...

[samberrie]

Oh my god. This.. it's.. the most glorious... thank you.

You have no idea how much I laughed and smiled throughout the course of this comment. You much comment forevermore. Or I will cry.

But aww thank you so very, very much, seriously. I'm so glad you've enjoy this so much. <3 Pretty much the only reason I even write is so I can make people's days a little better by making them laugh at a stupid joke or swoon at a well-written sex scene. At the end of the day, loving comments are just da bestest! Another thank you. Thank you. Oh god I can't stop lol.

[okiforeva]

Knowing that I made you feel happy makes me all warm and fuzzy inside...

[samberrie]

Aw shucks, you sure know how to flatter a gal.

I'll be looking forward to your comments then! Oy vey!
P.S. That Wayne's World gif is fabulous.