Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 24)
Author: samberrie (itsa me)
Pairing: George/Ringo I suppose
Rating: PG-13 man.
Warnings: Naughty language, crude humor, and oh Lord too much babble.
Time Frame: Second American Tour, 1965.
Summary: In this chapter, it’s to the Fiore’s and back on an awkward adventure.
Disclaimer!: I own no Beatles. None of their songs
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Yeah, I didn't want to make him too back and forth but it kind of turned out that way, lol. But I'm glad you liked this part anyways.
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I'm so glad you like my George POV, he's fun to write but it turns out to be difficult sometime because I see him as being a very meticulous and thought-provoking person. I can't fit his whole thought process in there, but I like to try lol.
Aw shucks, you liked that little metaphor thing about his thoughts eh? I thank you kindly.
Oh no, don't be mad if they don't get their harsh comeuppance lol. I don't want them to suffer too bad y'know, I'm just a kind soul!
Man, what a great gif. Ringo's sexy-face is perfection, and so is George's smile. Merci, merci!
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I really enjoyed this chapter (did u kno!!!!!!!!). I still love the way you write and your characterisations. And those terribly cute images, oh you you know what you do to me don't you you're a rascal.
What's going to happen to them? I'm excited. Tell me. No, don't. I want it to be a surprise.
This is a really good development though penis. Also the presence of Brian. A*. A+ because you're American.
This comment is such a train-wreck lol. My thoughts are really disorganised for some reason so forgive me, I only want to love and be loved.
Do you want me to pick out my favourite bits because I'm going to anyway.
"George had no desire to move to get out, and he suddenly wished he could act like a child and pretend to be asleep so someone would carry him in."
Let me love you.
"And what else should he feel, anyways? George let his eyes linger on the drummer the next time around in his ceiling-Ringo-ceiling cycle, trying to organize his thoughts. It was harder than ( ... )
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ugh, i could totally feel the whole stressed out tension thing George had going on
But, ugh, it's all...how George feels that maybe he shouldn't fuck Ringo anymore..it's like 'fine you got off, so keep going' or 'take no chances...'
I don't know! It was really great, and I can't wait to see what happens next :')
and lol jimmy omg
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Oh what's going to happen I wonder. Maybe I'll hit you with a wacky twist. But maybe not.. ooh so many possibilities how scary.
I'm glad you enjoyed it hurray! Jimmy's a boss and I wish everyone appreciated him more and my silly characterization. At least someone noticed. For that, I love you.
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aw you're welcome
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