Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 16)
Author: samberrie (itsa me)
Pairing: All George/Ringo for this chappy.
Rating: R
Warnings: Naughty language, crude humor, sexual mentioning’s
Time Frame: Second American Tour, 1965.
Summary: In this chapter, George makes it up to Ringo for ignoring him.
Disclaimer!: I own no Beatles. None of their songs and none of
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And especially glad you liked the smut because I totally just bs'd it. C: Thanks for your comment! Yay!
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I also love your explanation of George's habit to play guitar, and how it was better then any drug he ever had. I haven't personally had any sort of drugs, but I feel the same way about drawing! It's nearly euphoric, and time just seems to fly by!
The scene where George is laying his head on Ringo's lap... I don't know, but I think another picture may be in the future. ;)
The relationship between George and Ringo makes my heart explode with love~! Wonderful chapter! <3
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I'm so happy you like my humor and don't get annoyed by it, I have such an unnecessary amount of anecdotes and jokes in this chapter, it's seriously ridiculous.
I totally just added that part in there because I liked the visual. This chapter was giving me hell with where it wanted to go, ended up very differently than I had first planned. Originally, it ended up being a whole chapter of just a blowjob, but I was like no, no, no, I have a better idea! So maybe four re-writes later, I ended up with this kooky chapter, lol. But I'm quite relieved you enjoyed it, because I was seriously worried when posting this thinking it was less than adequate.
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I love eager!George. So cute. I could squeeze him all over. Shark!George seems like a legitimate fear for anyone receiving oral sex from him too. Yikes.
Also, yer funny. Which is always good when thrown in with smut.
Like that one storybook about the princess with a pea stuck in her arse or something?
I seriously have no idea what was so funny about it but this one bit had me laughing for like 5 minutes straight.
Also:
If Ringo could somehow capture all the noises George was making and put it on a record, it’d be number one on the charts in no time, he was sure of it.
This is true.
George is universally attractive, Ringo, you're right.
That had a much better structure in my head, but idk I got excited. Take that as a extra compliment!
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Heck yes, poor Ringo. George just wanted to please him D: too bad he had sharp teeeeth..
Yay! I'm funny! Danka dear. I'm glad that didn't turn you off or anything, I love funny smut. It makes it all the better in my humble opinion, indeed.
Have you read the "Princess and the Pea" way back in elementary school? Like Kindergarten or so. It's a princess who sleeps on a hundred mattresses because she can feel a pea under her first mattress, but even after all those mattresses, she can STILL feel the pea :o.. *facepalm*
That's what I was referring to, tee hee.
It's so, so true. George is one sexy mothuhfuckuh, ya better believe it. *nods*
And I'm pleased that my writing makes you incoherent C: Win!
Awesome comment is awesome. Yes, yes, yes.
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2. Don't worry, I'm a sex-craze teenager as well. C: Favorite? My, what an honor! <3
3. Why thank you! I try like really, really hard.
4. Wow, really? I can't even stand to look at the first few chapters, lmao.
5. Aww surgery? Hory cwap, I'll try and update once or twice by then!
6. Goodness, don't get hypothermia! XD
Your awesome comments = what I live for. :'D
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George is so cute! Everything. The shark-teeth thing was hilarious. And also a serious problem. That man had lethal teeth O.O
Anyway, I love funny/cute smut. Perfect!
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Isn't he though?Just the cutest. Haha I like the shark thing as well. I had to throw in my fixation with his teeth somewhere in this story. C:
Yay for funny smut! Thank you, thank you.
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