Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 16)

Aug 28, 2011 15:31

Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 16)
Author: samberrie (itsa me)
Pairing:  All George/Ringo for this chappy.
 Rating: R
Warnings: Naughty language, crude humor, sexual mentioning’s
Time Frame: Second American Tour, 1965.
Summary: In this chapter, George makes it up to Ringo for ignoring him.
Disclaimer!: I own no Beatles. None of their songs and none of ( Read more... )

george/ringo

Leave a comment

Comments 16

(The comment has been removed)

samberrie August 29 2011, 00:54:18 UTC
Hurray for In-characterness! Glad you liked that guitar bit.

And especially glad you liked the smut because I totally just bs'd it. C: Thanks for your comment! Yay!

Reply


onlywithbuttons August 28 2011, 23:15:31 UTC
I absolutely LOVE your sense of humor!! XD George falling off the couch at the end was perfect! Lol!

I also love your explanation of George's habit to play guitar, and how it was better then any drug he ever had. I haven't personally had any sort of drugs, but I feel the same way about drawing! It's nearly euphoric, and time just seems to fly by!

The scene where George is laying his head on Ringo's lap... I don't know, but I think another picture may be in the future. ;)

The relationship between George and Ringo makes my heart explode with love~! Wonderful chapter! <3

Reply

samberrie August 29 2011, 01:00:44 UTC
Heh heh, I was really just trying to find a way to end the chapter without dragging it on too much longer so I was like "Falling is always nice..."

I'm so happy you like my humor and don't get annoyed by it, I have such an unnecessary amount of anecdotes and jokes in this chapter, it's seriously ridiculous.

I totally just added that part in there because I liked the visual. This chapter was giving me hell with where it wanted to go, ended up very differently than I had first planned. Originally, it ended up being a whole chapter of just a blowjob, but I was like no, no, no, I have a better idea! So maybe four re-writes later, I ended up with this kooky chapter, lol. But I'm quite relieved you enjoyed it, because I was seriously worried when posting this thinking it was less than adequate.

Reply


spitrainbows August 29 2011, 01:15:01 UTC
This was great! I would use a more adventurous and exciting word but I'm larfing too much. Wah wah wahhh. This'll come out shite because I have the giggles now, but I digress...

I love eager!George. So cute. I could squeeze him all over. Shark!George seems like a legitimate fear for anyone receiving oral sex from him too. Yikes.
Also, yer funny. Which is always good when thrown in with smut.

Like that one storybook about the princess with a pea stuck in her arse or something?
I seriously have no idea what was so funny about it but this one bit had me laughing for like 5 minutes straight.
Also:
If Ringo could somehow capture all the noises George was making and put it on a record, it’d be number one on the charts in no time, he was sure of it.
This is true.

George is universally attractive, Ringo, you're right.

That had a much better structure in my head, but idk I got excited. Take that as a extra compliment!

Reply

samberrie August 29 2011, 01:28:48 UTC
Great is a great word, yessm. :3 No idea if you were even referring to this, but Wah-Wah is one of my favorite George songs, I could listen to that sexy tune all day.

Heck yes, poor Ringo. George just wanted to please him D: too bad he had sharp teeeeth..
Yay! I'm funny! Danka dear. I'm glad that didn't turn you off or anything, I love funny smut. It makes it all the better in my humble opinion, indeed.

Have you read the "Princess and the Pea" way back in elementary school? Like Kindergarten or so. It's a princess who sleeps on a hundred mattresses because she can feel a pea under her first mattress, but even after all those mattresses, she can STILL feel the pea :o.. *facepalm*
That's what I was referring to, tee hee.

It's so, so true. George is one sexy mothuhfuckuh, ya better believe it. *nods*

And I'm pleased that my writing makes you incoherent C: Win!
Awesome comment is awesome. Yes, yes, yes.

Reply

spitrainbows August 29 2011, 02:32:18 UTC
Ugh yes Wah-Wah is utter aural sex. Although because of the ambiguity of what a 'wah-wah' was before we googled it and found out it was a headache now in my household it's a boner. So mature, haw haw haw. Y'all got good taste in George songs though, just sayin ( ... )

Reply

samberrie August 29 2011, 02:54:52 UTC
When I first discovered the Beatles I was like "Fuck that skinny mofo, I can't even remember his name." Because they all have pretty catchy and memorable names 'cept for poor Hari Georgeson ( ... )

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

samberrie August 29 2011, 03:54:47 UTC
1. I do? Yay! *tears of joy*
2. Don't worry, I'm a sex-craze teenager as well. C: Favorite? My, what an honor! <3
3. Why thank you! I try like really, really hard.
4. Wow, really? I can't even stand to look at the first few chapters, lmao.
5. Aww surgery? Hory cwap, I'll try and update once or twice by then!
6. Goodness, don't get hypothermia! XD

Your awesome comments = what I live for. :'D

Reply


miss_lizzy777 August 29 2011, 07:43:49 UTC
I loved this. Seriously, it was fab.

George is so cute! Everything. The shark-teeth thing was hilarious. And also a serious problem. That man had lethal teeth O.O

Anyway, I love funny/cute smut. Perfect!

Reply

samberrie August 29 2011, 11:57:50 UTC
So very glad you enjoyed this chapter! Hurray!

Isn't he though?Just the cutest. Haha I like the shark thing as well. I had to throw in my fixation with his teeth somewhere in this story. C:

Yay for funny smut! Thank you, thank you.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up