fic: The Geocentric Days are Gone

Feb 11, 2009 16:42

Title: The Geocentric Days Are Gone
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sam/Daniel (vaguely implied Sam/Jack)
Notes: Have I mentioned how awesome thraesja is for not only putting up with my random emails, but also doing such an awesome job of beta reading?

the geocentric days are gone / and earth is still a sphere )

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fairyglass February 11 2009, 23:30:50 UTC
This was really, really lovely. Wonderful voices for Sam and Daniel, too. :)

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dizzydame February 12 2009, 01:01:08 UTC
Thank you! :D

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utkari02 February 12 2009, 00:01:52 UTC
Very very nice! Thanks for sharing! This is the first fic I've read where they are old, and it was quite enjoyable!

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dizzydame February 12 2009, 01:00:43 UTC
Thank you! :D

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amaranthtraces February 12 2009, 00:49:10 UTC
This. This easy, familiar, unfading love. This is Sam/Daniel.

My only bit of concrit would be that as paragraph four opened, I thought Sam was calling Jack. Maybe instead of speaking "his number" with the 'he' in the preceding paragraph being Jack, she can speak "a number". Then reveal who she called three paragraphs later as you do.

Love this piece. Thank you for sharing it :)

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dizzydame February 12 2009, 01:00:14 UTC
Wow. That is awesome feedback. <3 For some reason I've been hanging onto this for a while, unsure about posting it.

Changed that bit, thanks for pointing that out! (And for the record, I'm to blame for that - it was something I put in just before posting, or else I'm sure thraesja would have said the same thing.)

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amaranthtraces February 12 2009, 01:12:05 UTC
Heh. I'm very shy about giving concrit because my diplomacy is more of the Jack O'Neill variety than that of Daniel Jackson. But I figured if you could handle the sarcastoqueen thraesja, you could probably handle me ;)

I'm very glad you decided to post this piece instead of hanging onto it for eternity. It's simply lovely.

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dizzydame February 12 2009, 02:31:37 UTC
thraesja has actually been exceedingly gentle with me thus far. There's more ego soothing than sarcasm. But I can handle the concrit!

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thraesja February 14 2009, 00:24:04 UTC
Aw, glad you posted this. Thanks for the note.

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dizzydame February 14 2009, 07:37:35 UTC
I don't think I ever responded to your comment about the dog's name!

First off, Jack named him so Iggy didn't sound too ridiculous coming from him. And... you know, I have no idea why it popped into my head. Maybe Ellen was playing in the background and my subconscious went into overdrive. :P

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caffrey February 16 2009, 06:26:42 UTC
This was so so so very beautiful. Completely, entirely them. Unlike Sam/Jack I really find that Sam/Daniel can transcend time and everything and withstand the rigours of their work and everything that's happened to them. You voiced that perfectly. :)

Thank you for sharing this. :)

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