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sammirish

The Killer's Nightmare - Chapter 1

Dec 14, 2007 11:34

Jaejoong/Yunho, Yoochun/Junsu
The ultimate killer he is, but what is it that haunts him so?

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( another fresh scent of rust that he knew was blood, Jaejoong’s blood )

story: the killer's nightmare

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mumbles December 14 2007, 04:51:37 UTC

me :D

mumbles December 14 2007, 08:01:17 UTC

Damn Jaejoong's hurt. Man I can't wait for an update now!!!

starry1 December 14 2007, 05:28:08 UTC

interesting. do update soon. hope jae is not too badly hurt.

feyla December 14 2007, 05:48:02 UTC

OH I really like this. Really like it. This beginning certainly has me wanting to know what's going to happen next. JaeJoong's so tough, but the thunder is scaring him and how exactly things are going to work out between him and YunHo should be interesting. It wasn't a love at first sight thing, which is okay every once in a while, but really I need some development. I don't know what your plans are, but it certainly looks like this is going to be a good fic! I'll be looking forward to reading more chapters!

minyunee December 14 2007, 05:59:51 UTC

!!

8D

baegopa December 14 2007, 06:04:54 UTC

GASP. YOU HAVE ME HOOKED.

I swear my eyes didn't leave the screen while I was reading this. OMG, girl you're so talented! Jello is so in awe at this first chapter. I don't have a liking for thriller like jaeho fanfctions, but wow, this has changed my opinion! I can't wait to read your second chapter 8D

SFJOIDHFSIH AMAZING!