Stay With Me-Prologue

May 13, 2009 14:08

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brianshanelvr May 13 2009, 23:22:55 UTC
more.more.more. =]

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mutelorelei May 14 2009, 06:53:25 UTC
I hope there will be more soon?

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astro599 May 14 2009, 07:39:52 UTC
I love your icon. :) I think it rocks too. Not because it makes me feel good (most of the time I'm panic-stricken) but because it's interesting, and that's good writing. You know we're headed someplace cool in season 5.

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mutelorelei May 14 2009, 08:14:36 UTC
I've been continually a little shocked at the backlash this season from what seems like the majority of fans. What's interesting is that the complaints are so varied.

I'm not saying this season is perfect, but overall I like it. I think it's very boring if Sam and Dean are always (metaphorically) skipping through a field of daisies, hand in hand, staring into each other's eyes with intense brotherly love. That can be fun too, but not for always. And I tend to think that it's all going to end on a happier note eventually. I think in this fandom, a lot of people are particularly quick to judge.

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astro599 May 14 2009, 08:17:41 UTC
Yeah, life isn't all sunshine and flowers, esp. for these poor bastards. I also think it will end happier, but they're under unimaginable pressure, and that's going to cause the mother of all fights. As we've seen. I actually like the tension and fighting, because it really brings home how desperate everyone is, and how dire their situations are.

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schnute23 May 14 2009, 13:38:16 UTC
MORE ?? PLEASE ? O_O

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marius2045 May 14 2009, 14:10:14 UTC
Great story, loved the idea, but you really need to get a beta-reader. ^^

And from the view of a nurse: They'd both be dead by now because there is no way in hell, Dean would have even be able to pull Sammy out of the water. And with him cold as well he can not warm Sam up, lol.

But that is what fiction is for right?

Keep writing.

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sammygirl26 May 14 2009, 15:42:33 UTC
okay, you're right about Dean being wet not being able to warm him lol so I decided to have Dean just pull out of the water without being wet. :) And I know I'm horrible with the grammer, I'm going to try and proofread it now. :)

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marius2045 May 14 2009, 17:37:50 UTC
I completely agree on your changes, lol.

Hope you don't take this as a flame because it was not, not at all. But I am german and even I thought, wtf?, reading parts of the story. *ggg*

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I'm not offended sammygirl26 May 14 2009, 18:04:17 UTC
What parts don't you like? Or is it just bad grammer? I'm trying to make it better :) Are some parts just really horrible?

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fanofsuper May 15 2009, 02:11:05 UTC
Iwant a Sam & Dean of my own to keep me warm.

Looking forward to the next update

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