Comments | sammyjayne: Holy Moly ive finished it :)

sammyjayne

Holy Moly ive finished it :)

Jan 07, 2010 00:48

Here it is. My first proper Doctor Who fic. Trying to rewrite. The End of Time. The way it should have been

Fic: Fix You (Or Fix Who)
Author: sammyjayneFandom: Doctor Who ( Read more... )

Comments 6

ana_khouri January 7 2010, 18:59:30 UTC

Aww! I would love to see that season 5! Hummm.. I think this should be a parallel world thing where this version goes into comics or something like Buffy did eventually...

My fav part? 'don't you ever change?' absolutely perfect.. : )

Now if only I could get the bunnies in my head to wake up and write the sanctuary/Who crossovers!

sammyjayne January 7 2010, 19:07:56 UTC

Aww thanks. There are some audio cds you can get set in S4. That might keep me going.

Actually i was thinking about that Helen/SarahJane crossover this afternoon. Watch this space, lol :)

*hugs*x

ladyjfoechuckle January 8 2010, 01:08:41 UTC

Coming from the link I asked you on Facebook.
I like your story, nice ending. I love the fact that Donna is more in the story and that somehow you choose to do her come back almost like their 1st meeting, nice wink.
I would love to see that!!
Plus, in my opinion,Ten and Donna are just perfect together. She has such a sharp tongue, perfect for him :-p

sammyjayne January 8 2010, 18:52:39 UTC

Aww thank you :) I agree. Donna took no shit from him. Hoping to write more x

starbuck1980 January 11 2010, 17:11:26 UTC

Aw! For your first Who fic this was awesome!

I too love how you made Donna more part of the story. And I agree with Cherylynn, I love that line and how you kept referring to The Doctor as Spaceman for Donna's pov.

Still waiting to see the Dr myself! (in the hospital) so replying omitted Cherylynn's phone, tricky!

sammyjayne January 11 2010, 17:22:16 UTC

Aww. Donna had to be more part of the story. It was so unfair to only see her a little bit. And she made no part of defeating the Master/Timelords, which she should have been.

I am planning another one. DW/Sanctuary cross over. Set in 1887. Just might take a little time to plot out.

Ive been so amazed by all the good feedback i've had. Prefering my eneding to the one RTD wrote, lol Even my sister liked it, which huge coming from her x