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[sammythewire]

I don't really post here alot anymore, I guess I just don't have alot to say. Well not lately anyway. Wait, thats not right. I have alot to say, but not alot that can be conveyed by text, or comforted by this little internet booky thing. Finally I have something to post. I wrote this poem a few weeks (maybe only days but I think it was longer) ago

Comments

[luna306]

that's terribly sad

very very well written...

~L

[autumnsea]

It's hard to see this kind of emotion in males ... and I'm just not over generalising here. This side of boys/men is tucked away from the public eye .. especially females eyes ... I love that you made this work real and honest in thought and feeling. I think it's a poem you can keep for your children and their children (if you so decide to have kids in the future), because with it, it lends the lesson of life, from boy to man. The journey so strong that we seldom see the tears that make up that strength.

Thank you.

[anonymous]

Wow....I really liked it. The writing itself is superb, and the poem is crafted so well you can see everything in your mind's eye.

hey you

[anonymous]

sam change that line to "envelopes instead".

[sleepystarlet]

hi i found you on the cu_boulder community. i really like your poem. it's really emotional! great writing. write more!!!

[sammythewire]

Wow, I haven't been on here in forever, thats actually a really old draft but I'm happy you liked it. I think I may go dig around in your journal now..
Sam