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[sammythewire]

DAMNIT PEOPLE!!! I DONT CARE IF YOU DON'T READ MY JOURNAL FUCKING READ MY POEM AND GIVE ME FEEDBACK!!
HEY
YOU
STOP READING THIS
READ MY POEM!!!

its eating me alive, I swear, it goddamn started with my fingertips
thy're gone

Comments

[autumnsea]

I read your journal. You haven't written much of late and I didn't have time to give your poem the attention it needed on the day you posted it ... but I just read it and commented.

you fool

[fireseer]

you silly fool.
if you want people to READ anything it needs to be fewer than 10 lines...ok they MIGHT read a sonnet, but even that at 14 is really pushing it.

but, to be fair I HAVE read your poem.

several times in fact
i am just looking for something more usefull to say than "i liked it"

soon...soon i shall comment.