[ooc ; comments and critique?!]

[samurai_gr33n]

AITH HERE

I play Cody at samurai_gr33n and Payne at rookiekiller, and I could really use some critique here. :D; Anonymous comments are enabled so don't be afraid to tell me what's for..!

Planned logs

Cody:Samurai Green Explodes Into the Doctor's Office! Samurai Physical?! (Eldoon

Comments

[anonymous]

Cody: I am awestruck by how detailed you've made the Samurai universe. Don't be afraid to go beyond that (photography? school?) but at the same time, I don't think you're running out of material at all.

Payne: I'd like to at some point see Payne in one of those trial events.

General Comments: Do more scenes! Interact with more people! I really like the level of humor you put into your characters.

[rookiekiller]

The Samurai universe is maybe what I'm the most nerdishly-obsessive about in this RP, so I'm glad other people like it. XD Yeah, I've actually been thinking about the photography thing recently, and I'll definitely get into it after SamuraiCon, if not before!

Payne's... kind of an odd duck with the trials, since any case he's in would more or less have to be one that had to go for the defense. But maybe I'll talk to the mods and the defense attorneys and see what they think. ;D

Doing more scenes and interacting with more people... That's pretty much my one weakness, isn't it? XD I've been trying to throw Cody and Payne into conversations with people outside their main circle, and I'm getting better with logs recently. Thanks for the concrit..!

[anonymous]

I agree with the above anon... The sheer amount of worldbuilding you've done for the fandom-in-a-fandom is astounding :D It's one of many reasons your Cody is so fun to read

Moar scenes with Wocky

Also, your Payne is a dick, which is great

[rookiekiller]

Glad to see my work on that isn't going unnoticed. XD; I'm so nervous all the time that people aren't seeing how much work I put into stuff so it's good to be proven wrong!

Don't worry, there'll be a lot more Cody and Wocky in the future- conveniently, Wocky's player happens to be my older brother, so that's pretty easy to do. XD

Payne is a dick, isn't he? XD

Thanks for the concrit!

[droehnendrecht]

You know I love your Payne and Cody, but I do have a few suggestions for the future regarding Cody

[speedy_delite]

I'd like to see Payne kill a rookie.

[autodidakt]

I second this :D

He and Kris should meet up sometime too so I can add Payne to the list of "People who have wronged me" :D :D :D

[aitherion]

I'm down with that. XD

[aitherion]

As soon as events permit I'm good with that. :|b

[saltyolddoc]

I want to do a log with both your characters, because they are both made of so much awesome.

Cody could be Eldoon's IC in to video games when he shows up for a checkup or something with his DS. (There have been chatroom jokes about him asking for a WiiStation720 FOR THE PATIENTS, NO RLY!)

As for Payne-- with his wife still gone, I bet he's still eating unhealthy crap like Hungry Man and takeout. He should maybe come get his blood pressure checked out. >__>

[samurai_gr33n]

"MY MOM SAYS I NEED TO COME GET A CHECKUP BECAUSE I NEVER DO ANYTHING AND SHE THINKS I HAVE SOME SORT OF MENTAL DISORDER, HEY CAN I PLAY MY DS DURING THE CHECKUP?!" aka 'yuss plz'

More or less yeah, he probably should. XD

[saltyolddoc]

XDDD

See, that is why you're such a brilliant Cody.