Oct 10, 2005 05:29
setting her thinking of my life i am at the pont where i have plans for my life cap is going in to the army becuse he wonts away form his famly and he wonts me to go with him but that is just running away form his real porbs its good money but i will have to kill but i think life has much more to offer me
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Its sitting. Not setting. Generally people use periods (ie ".") to end a sentence. Proper grammar also says that the beginning of a sentence will have a capatilized letter. (ie. I am at the point where I have plans for my life.) And all "i"s that stand alone and are used when referring to yourself are capatilized as well. Its wants. Not wonts. Before you start criticizing DO something with your life. Don't judge what others do with theirs. At least they are DOING something instead of just talking.
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