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Oct 10, 2005 05:29

setting her thinking of my life i am at the pont where i have plans for my life cap is going in to the army becuse he wonts away form his famly and he wonts me to go with him but that is just running away form his real porbs its good money but i will have to kill but i think life has much more to offer me

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slayer_arngrim October 10 2005, 18:01:29 UTC
Going into the army is not just "running away". He has no other good solid options, other than moving in with Robert's parents and finishing high school and then going into the Marines. Either way he is going to end up in the military. The Army is a solution for people who don't have money to go to college and/or are trying to find out what they should do with the rest of their lives. And life won't have much to offer you until you can learn how to spell, Russel.

Its sitting. Not setting. Generally people use periods (ie ".") to end a sentence. Proper grammar also says that the beginning of a sentence will have a capatilized letter. (ie. I am at the point where I have plans for my life.) And all "i"s that stand alone and are used when referring to yourself are capatilized as well. Its wants. Not wonts. Before you start criticizing DO something with your life. Don't judge what others do with theirs. At least they are DOING something instead of just talking.

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slap_that_bitch October 19 2005, 22:46:54 UTC
hey i got a new livejournal, so add me.
<3 Kelli

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anonymous October 25 2005, 00:08:13 UTC
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