The Day My Life Ended

[samwisegamgee37]

This poem was written by a very good friend of mine, D Bennett. He doesn't write poetry that often but I think after you read this you'll agree that he should.

The day my life endedi will always remember

Comments

[anonymous]

yes..thats my dam poem..get off it..im god=)

[samwisegamgee37]

lol, dork

[anonymous]

it's good topic for a poem, but the poem itself is really not that well written. not to mention the childish shortening of simple words (ex: you -> u, and -> an) which just generally got on my nerves, along with the awkwardness of the words and a few misspellings. i'm really not trying to be mean... it's just the fact that the poem itself is pretty badly written.

delusions of grandeur never helped anyone.

[samwisegamgee37]

Excuse me, but, the person who wrote it isn't trying to get published or win a spelling bee, they're expressing themselves, and its pretty clear that your judging his writing, when you have no idea who he is or what his life is, so maybe, if you would try for two seconds to see that not everyone is a proffessional, you would also see that it is well written. Writing is a form of art, the first rule of art is to know all the rules, and then break them. There is no one "form" of poetry, so step off.

[anonymous]

no one cares if it gets on your nerves