Today I want to Live

[samzi_chan]

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Today I Want to Live

- Gabriel Giron

"you only live once"
those are the words 
I had tattooed across my back, 
back when I was seventeen 
and he thought he knew everything 
'well at least I got that one right 
because today, 
today,

today I want to live. 
and I don't want to give you any suicidal rhetoric 

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[douri___]

I love that poem! :3

If you need any help with English, it's always good to ask. You're doing very well, I think, considering you're still learning. I'll give you a couple things to remember.

You typed "His poems is"; when you use a plural noun, you use the word "are" instead of "is". So the correct way to say that would be "His poems are". It would be the same if you were to say "the cats are playing".

And when you typed "Yesterday is Friday", you switch "is" to "was" since it's past tense. "Today is" would be good, but when speaking in the past tense you use the word "was".

I hope that all made sense!

Thanks!

[samzi_chan]

Thank you so much!
I love you ^^
I get it. I will fix it now

Re: Thanks!

[douri___]

You're welcome! If you have any questions or anything, don't hesitate to ask me.

Re: Thanks!

[samzi_chan]

Yup. I'll