TSN fic: Eternal sunshine of our minds

[sanann]

Title: Eternal sunshine of our minds
Author: sanann
Genre: slash, drama
Pairing: Mark/Eduardo, Chris/Dustin
Rating: R
Word count: ~6500
Beta: awesome twivamp92
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Warnings: angst, but I promise it won't end badly
Summary: Marks wants to empty his life of Wardo. TSN version of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind.
A/N: I got obsessed with writing

Comments

[savetomorrow]

Oh my god, do you have any idea how fucking beautiful this is. ♥

[sanann]

Oh, thank you so much.
Fucking beautiful is great, so great. I love it.
Just... thanks <3

[moeexyz]

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this is so painful, but like in a good way. it's just beautifully written. and they're all such idiots who just need to stop and be happy. and lol at the dysfunctional four, sean has never been more accurate. and just the ending.

i'm sorry i couldn't be more coherent. it's late and this fic kind of metaphorically punched me in the heart.

[sanann]

Gosh, I'm so bad at answering comments.
Thank you!
I'm thrilled that this story evokes such strong emotions.

[sanann]

Of course Wardo was trying to erase Mark, and his thoughts that he should have been the one to erase him make sense as he already did that before.
They could never forget each other.
Thank you for reading and commenting.

[thedisgruntled]

ahhh! i loved this! it was beautiful and mournful. i loved the simple sadness of it and how it turned into hopefulness. kudos.

[sanann]

Thank you.
I wanted to write something bittersweet and hopeful, because those guys are bittersweet and angsty, but I wanted to give them hope and happy ending.

[jiainjj]

I love your way of describing how sad and lost four of the main characters are in the beginning and how you make the things get better and better.
I like how you write them for trying to give up something important and force themselves to move on and just fail to do so(it's like a parallel comparison, Mark and Dustin versus Wardo and Chris, the former try to forget while the latter try to leave).
I like all the OCs, especially the scene where Dustin hugs with a lady and confesses his 'unrequited' love.
This is beautiful written.
Thanks for sharing such beautiful story.

[sanann]

I like when my stories make my readers think about motives and see the parallels. It's a huge compliment.
I was wondering about the scene with Dustin opening up to another person, but the state he was in - desperate and broken, made it clear that it was easier for him to open up to someone who didn't know all the baggage he had to carry.
Thank you for reading and commenting!

[jiainjj]

Yes, I agree with your opinion. Sometimes it's more easy to talk with another person who don't know everything about you. You don't need to worry whether what you say will affect the relationship or something like that.
And this make the whole scene more touching.
As I imagine the girl Dustin has dated would have some mix feeling toward his confession. Like surprise and a little bit angry at first, then of course she will feel sympathy with Dustin and will hug him protectively. Like may be she also feel the pain and sorry for him and just hope him to be happy.
Yes. I LOVE this scene and think too much about it.
It's not so much words you have used, but the effect is overwhelming.

[sanann]

Oh, I was thinking about that girl a lot, and I wanted my readers to think about her emotions without me writing about them.
And it's just my thing, I love using a few words and making my readers think about them, about what hides behind those words, because I have those mute scenes in my head and they are still there on the paper, between the lines.