Comments | sanctimoniousxx: prompts #41: Winter, #4: Secrets

sanctimoniousxx

prompts #41: Winter, #4: Secrets

Aug 11, 2008 09:36

Title: Winter
Fandom: Yuugioh
Character(s): Malik Ishtahl - centric
Prompt: #41: Winter
Word Count: 925
Rating: PG - 13
Summary: Malik hated winter. He, being a creature of Egyptian sands, never knew what winter was...

( The darkness seemed to crawl to him... )

fandom, yuugioh, fanfic, 50scenes

Comments 5

cefferis August 11 2008, 19:07:39 UTC

Wow, the first one was great. Creepy. I squee'd when you mentioned Russia @___@ It's the wind that really gets to you.

The second one was really different. Poor Jounouchi. You can be a real weirdo sometimes.

I honestly think they both suck. *shot* I TL;DR myself, and skimmed over for spelling and grammar but not coherency and all around "DID THIS SHIT MAKE SENSE?" So, these two are not my best writing. It's what I get for writing crap on a sleep deprived high.
Oh dear that's exactly what I did with Milk

sanctimoniousxx August 14 2008, 00:18:08 UTC

Thanks! I always wanted to go to Russia. I don't think I'll last in the cold, though. D:

LOL. I get all my greatest ideas on sleep deprived highs. But because I am sleep deprived they tend not to make a lot of sense. Hence why the second one was in a different style.

spinning_avia August 13 2008, 05:45:19 UTC

ILY BB. MALIK ANGST FTW. COUGHnowwritemalikjousexytiemsontheblimpplzCOUGH

AND I MUST SAY I WAS RATHER DISAPPOINTED WHEN AFTER KAIBA TOOK JOU HOME, HE DID NOT HEAL ALL HIS INNER WOUNDS WITH HIS COCK. ;D *snerk*

you have much skillz dahhling, idk what you're moping about.

sanctimoniousxx August 14 2008, 00:20:01 UTC

LOL. MALIK ANGST IS THE BEST KIND OF ANGST IS THE BEST KIND, NO. HMMM, MAYBE I WILL. I'M GONNA HAVE TO READ A LOT OF GOOD PR0N STORIES THOUGH SINCE I SUCK AT THOSE KIND OF STORIES.

LMAO. AWW POOR BB. COCK HEALING WILL BE IN THE NEXT KAIJOU I PROMISE. LMFAO.

I mope about all my writing, BB, you should know that. I AM NEVER SATISFIED.

arien_elensar February 3 2009, 08:50:40 UTC

You have taken a common Kaiba/Joey plot and done it justice. Love the mention of Disney and Jounouchi's friendship with the bathroom floor and toliet. XD The way in which you make the characters question themselves, or lack thereof, is different from how other fics turn it into a sappy cliche. The pinky thing was random but, so like Jounouchi. Wonderful job. Sorry if this question is annoying or I missed a note, but will there be more?