New Year drabble - ByaRen

[marinliliz]

[Characters]: Abarai Renji, Kuchiki Byakuya, Kuchiki Hikaru and Kuchiki Kaoru
[Pairing]: Byakuya/Renji (ByaRen)
[Summary]: Renji's been absent from home for too long.
[Word Count]: ~1900
[Finished]: 07.January.2010
[Beta]: not beta-read
[Warnings]: Implied Male-Pregnancy | Sex | Angst | Fluff
[Rating]: R
[Notes]: Hikaru is about 9/10 years old and Kaoru is

Comments

[chaoticmayhem]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, it was sooooooo sweet. Byakuya sleeping in renji's futon. Hikaru was wonderful, he caught up on byakuya's moods. Marital duties hahaha lolz. well that will happen with these two. Thankies for the fic.

[marinliliz]

Hehehe, I did went for sweet. Thank you for the lovely review.

[marinliliz]

Thank you. I have this antenna that tells me when people are having such cravings!^_____________^

[lnasados]

That was so wonderful. The worried Bya between the boys and kikaru is a laugh. Wiping away the kiss and pushing his luck with pushing the back to bed order. Totally cracked me up. Reminded me of Renji. The greeting. WAHOOT
to the tongue wicking. You don't read it too often. The pestering from th kids to get going and the animated sotry of crayons. All made for a great story. Sorry it's taken so long to read and comment. Went riding and my horse went one way while i went a more painful way. I should have been paying attention instead of laughing at my graceless dog.

[marinliliz]

Thanks.These days they already write themselves. Hope you're okay with all that horse-riding gone awry.

[lnasados]

Yeah I'm good. No broken bones just torn muscles. Thunder got the last laugh though.

[marinliliz]

Animals usually do!^^'

[marianek]

Forgive me, dear, for not commenting for such a long time. I was planning to draw you a few fanart, to recompense a lack of birthday present for you (:*) but it just didn't work, I was drawing and drawing and all I got from all the tries was shit :/ I'm sorry :(

I love this story <3 Both Byakuya and kids have to be so scared while Renji was away... I love the posture of Hikaru, telling his father it's ok now- tries to behave like a really brave son, taking care of his mum while dad is away ^^... even if mum is not evacly a mum XD And the sex scene- so hot! *fangirl mode on*

Sorry one more time and HAPPY BIRTHDAY :*:*:* I promise soon I'll make up things and I'll post the pictures- after reading this I have A LOT in mind ^^

[marinliliz]

Totally forgiven! I know what's like to do things on demand, things never seem to turn out the way we want them.

It was truly hard on Byakuya not having Renji around, not that he'll ever admit to it but Hikaru could sense it, being the intelligent little boy he is, and did something about it.

Thank you and I'll look forward to the pictures^__^

[rzrbladepetals]

Sweet fic!

[marinliliz]

Thank you:)