New Year drabble - HikaSusu

[marinliliz]

[Characters]: Komamura Susumu, Kuchiki Hikaru and Ukitake Yuu.
[Pairing]: Hikaru/Susumu (HikaSusu)
[Summary]: The threads trick Susumu.
[Word Count]: ~440
[Finished]: 07.January.2010
[Beta]: not beta-read
[Warnings]: Angsty
[Rating]: PG
[Notes]: All of our Sandbox kids have a special ability; Susumu is able to see the Love Threads of Shinigami: reiatsu

Comments

[vampyreranger]

Aw! I love these two together. And happy belated birthday!

[marinliliz]

They really are cute together. Thank you for the birthday wishes^__^

[gymnasticsbaby]

aww!that's one way to know you love someone. they are really cute together.

[marinliliz]

It is not the most comfortable way of finding out, for sure.

[gokuma]

I liked the description of Susumu's "falling in love" :)

I don't think that reiatsu lines go from (and to) a heart. I kinda imagined that there's no specific "place" where they start and end...

[marinliliz]

I really didn't have an idea of how the reiatsu would work so I just wrote it this way, it gave a big symbolism to the way Susumu was feeling. And now that I think about it, I kinda envision the threads fading a little before reaching a person. We gotta get some facts straight.XD

I also said I would send you my things before posting them and never did *is forgetful when exited to post*^^'

And I need a HikaSusu icon!

[marianek]

I didn't expected Susumu to fall for Hikaru so early, but I guess love didn't give him any choice XD I would surely fall for a red haired Kuchiki too <3

[marinliliz]

I think from early age, Susumu would be aware of the ribbons and their meaning and realise the exact moment it happened to him. And not that he deserves, but I had to torture him a bit.^_^'

Who wouldn't fall for a red-haired Kuchiki?

[animefreak8705]

Susumu is just too cute *possily my fav even thought i love all of them* You write them soo wonderfully!!